Reviews for Innocence Lost
notjustme22 chapter 37 . 3/9/2010
sorry, hab im Moment einfach keine Zeit, die Geschichte „richtig“ weiterzulesen Ich hab aber heute gesehen, dass das neue Kapitel schon das letzte ist und es überflogen, weil ich eben doch noch halbwegs zeitnah eine Review schreiben wollte – schön, dass die zwei es miteinander versuchen wollen, auch wenn ich gerade noch nicht weiß, wie es dazu kam ;). Allerdings schreit die Geschichte nach einer Fortsetzung! Ich meine, bleiben sie zusammen? Was macht Albus, um das zu ändern? Wie geht es mit Voldemort weiter? Was genau hat Lasse eigentlich mit all dem zu tun (von seiner Beziehung mit Albus mal abgesehen)? Severus' Verhältnis zu Eileen ist, glaube ich, auch noch offen. Müsste doch eigentlich reichen als Begründung (?) Naja, ist natürlich deine Entscheidung, aber ich würde mich freuen. Außerdem ist Tizzy als OC viel zu gut dargestellt, um sie aufzugeben (nein, das ist kein unsubstantiiertes Geschleime, ich mein das auch so). Danke erst mal für diese Geschichte, hat wie immer Spaß gemacht!
Layla Luv chapter 37 . 3/9/2010
SEQUEL! You have to do one! Plz! )
Viva Palestina chapter 37 . 3/9/2010
Its..over? Oh no :(

I suppose I was wondering if you would turn it AU or if you would find a way to make it fit into the original HP like you did with Tonks and Snape. I guess you decided to just leave us guessing :) Or maybe you will turn it AU in the epilogue. And make Dumbledore a better person. After Tizzy was happy for him, couldnt he be happy for her?

Thank you!
Brume7 chapter 37 . 3/9/2010

I loved this chapter! It was great to see them so happy... And I would be very interested if you did a sequel as I would love to read more about Severus and Tizzy...

Thanks for this lovely story.
trista chapter 37 . 3/9/2010
please keep going:) it can't be the end!
notwritten chapter 37 . 3/8/2010
Young woman. Your chapters are not rotten. They are good. So are your stories good. You are a very good writer. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. If you want to do a sequel, do it. keep smiling. :-)
Someone aka Me chapter 37 . 3/8/2010
PLEASE do a sequel! I love this story so much! Fantastic chapters here at the end!

junewilliams7 chapter 37 . 3/8/2010
Epilogue? You're not going to show us how Tizzy helps him survive the war and survive Nagini's bite in Shrieking Shack in DH? Eeps. I'm glad Lasse tried to stand up for Severus. Thanks for updating, and I'll be waiting for the epilogue!
wickedwench1 chapter 37 . 3/8/2010
Yes to epilogue and yes to sequel! I love Tizzy!
Cassiopeia823 chapter 37 . 3/8/2010
Epilogue definitly required. Want to know how they end up beyond this; together or apart?
NoahIrene chapter 37 . 3/8/2010
LOVE it! Sequel? Only if you feel like it, I'm happy with either! D

Awesome Job with this!
wandamarie chapter 37 . 3/8/2010
SituationalExtrovert chapter 37 . 3/8/2010
Oh, good. Please figure out a way for the epilogue or sequel to give them a happy ending. You can even go canon-compliant with DH and have Nagini bite him, because Tizzy will have 16 years of being a healer under her belt, and between the healer and the potions guru, they will hopefully have the beilliant notion of keeping blood-replenishe and dittany and anti-venom handy. Being that Severus hangs around with a megalomaniacal despot with delusions of godhood, who happens to keep a bloody huge venomous snake for a familiar. Please, for the love of God, let him be at least as smart as JKR always made him out to be, without making himstupid enough to forget something as vital as that.

Matter of fact, it is that very thing that completely irks me about Deathly Hallows. Well, that, and the whole iterminable camping thing, too. For me, killing off Snape in such a lame way should be the Fourth Unforgivable. Especially since an antidote to Nagini's venom already existed! St. Mungo's used it to cure Arthur Weasley in OOTP, for crying out loud! And as an Order member, SNAPE probably made it!

Which is why I love fanfic: because talented people like yourself get to make things happen they way Rowling SHOULD have.

I'm looking forward to seeing how you finish this off. Or continue it. HINT, HINT, HINT!


severus49 chapter 37 . 3/8/2010
I love the fluffy little lemons! They're great! I'm sad seeing the end come so soon - I do think you could have gone ten more chapters with this one. There's enough story with what happened to Lasse, what happened with Tizzy and Severus, what happened with the supposed end of Voldemort - there was so much more to be said! Excellent story overall and a great read to boot!
Alabaster Princess chapter 37 . 3/8/2010
Oh no. The 'mum talk'. we've all been there :/

brilliant,inspired with the reducing of the classes.:)

aww, cuteness at the dinner table. I wouldnt be able to eat, itd make me sick, lol ;)

yay for poppy;fixes allproblems, not just medical ones.

lol,family interference! *sniggers*

andgood for minn, coming round just in time to convince the others. :D

yes yes yes! fucking yes! good on Lasse, and minn, and up yours Albus, you *inserts one of B's favourite 'lou-isms'* :

aww, beautiful, beautiful ending! and a mention? oh my! I am spoiled! :D Thank YOU dear for such a great story! :) (even if it was a bit... victorian for my tastes) ;)
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