Reviews for Innocence Lost
sky17 chapter 2 . 12/2/2009
I luv this story! Your writing and character insight is fantastic!
watin77 chapter 2 . 12/2/2009
well... i'd prefer quality (not that your quality is bad or anything! it's superb, but such short chapters just don't seem like they would work for this fic) and length over rapid updates. so, longer chapters please?

aside from that, i wanted to tell you that currently you are now officially my favorite HP FFnet author-two great fics that are updated on a regular basis? it's like mana from heaven. thanks so much!
notwritten chapter 2 . 12/2/2009
Longer chapters please. Good chapter. Keep smiling. :-)
wandamarie chapter 2 . 12/2/2009
IT WAS A GOOD ONE THANKS CANT WANT TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER THANKS
calmest-tempest chapter 2 . 12/2/2009
Already, I'm enthralled with your story! I love the way that you develop your characters and your style of writing just speaks to me. I've read many of your other stories and have likewise been thrilled! Keep it up!
Aurelia Rose chapter 1 . 12/2/2009
This is interesting...

Continue if you please.

- AR
Brume7 chapter 1 . 12/2/2009
Hi again!

I 'm a reader of "from the corner" so, when I saw your new fic, I just went to read it...

I liked this first chapter! There are already characters I like, Dumbledore, McGonagall, and Severus... And your new character, Tizzy, seems interesting... I think it's a good idea to begin this story when you did it, when Severus went to see Albus. I believe I haven't read this sort of fic but it seems a good idea... So, I 'm very interested in this new fic, and would like you to continue...

Thanks...
French-Lo chapter 1 . 12/2/2009
Interesting first chapter! Abe and Minerva are back! great!
Eleantris chapter 1 . 12/2/2009
I've never actually read a Severus/OC story before but when this came through as I've got you on author alert, I thought It would be worth a look, especially since it's you. And I have to say - I like it! A great start to the story and I'm really looking forward to see what happens. X D
Mother of Tears chapter 1 . 12/2/2009
Very, very interesting. And it's true, I don't tend to read OC fics, but this one sounds intriguing. Besides, i just like your writing. You could probably write anything and I'd follow it. i'd also say don't let it go to your head, but I know most fanfic writers are unsung heros. We need all the encouragement we can get! So bask in it. You aught to be a pro writer, you know that? Keep the chapters coming!
Aletto chapter 1 . 12/2/2009
wow! so Minerva and Abe have a daughter and you called her like one of the Erinyes.. I like it!

I like your works, as always.. so.. good writing, can't wait to read more and see how the story goes! :D
notjustme22 chapter 1 . 12/2/2009
„let me know whether you'd like me to continue“

tja, nicht ganz einfach...

also, Geschichten mit OCs lese ich eigentlich sehr gerne, wenn sie gut geschrieben sind und das war bei Deinen bisher immer der Fall; eine Geschichte über den jungen Severus stelle ich mir grundsätzlich auch interessant vor (der Anfang war schon mal viel versprechend!), mein Problem ist eher die canon compliance; da fallen mir spontan drei Möglichkeiten ein:

a) die Geschichte ist für den Zeitraum der Bücher canon compliant und Severus kommt VORHER mit Tizzy für begrenzte Zeit zusammen – dann würde ich die Geschichte auf keinen Fall lesen – bzw. wäre hinterher sehr enttäuscht; sorry, aber der arme Severus musste in den Büchern schon genug leiden...

b) AU insofern, als alles so läuft wie in den Büchern, nur dass Severus eben Tizzy hat – ich weiß nicht, solche Geschichten wirken meist sehr konstruiert, wäre aber auch einen Versuch wert

b) Severus und Tizzy kommen zusammen und alles weitere ist komplett AU – würde ich ganz sicher lesen (wenn Du mir ein happy end versprichst ;) )

könntest Du vielleicht einen entsprechenden Hinweis geben, um mir diese unglaublich schwierige Entscheidung zu erleichtern? Wäre echt lieb!
Lilia Alves chapter 1 . 12/2/2009
Well, I really like the way you write so liked the story... But I do love From The Corner and I hope you won't forget about that one for this one... Bye
Whatever Makes You Break chapter 1 . 12/2/2009
Please continue! I am hooked already :)
branwen-s chapter 1 . 12/2/2009
This beginning definitely sounds interesting.

I shall add this story to my story alert list and wait patiently for the next installment.

branwen
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