|Reviews for Innocence Lost|
| wickedwench1 chapter 1 . 12/1/2009
I'm liking it so far!
| Zoe Bright chapter 1 . 12/1/2009
Coffee! You must continue! Though... from the corner is also dear to me.
Tizzy is a bit girly, and it would be nice to see her mature and get wise. To change from "I want to fight too!" to "I will be here safe getting better at my magics/fighting skills [and falling in love :P] until you need me to fight"
I would love to read more!
| Maggie Ernst chapter 1 . 12/1/2009
Oh good. You've started a new story before the last one is even done. I'm looking forward to it
| junewilliams7 chapter 1 . 12/1/2009
I like this very much. I would be happy to see you continue this, as long as Severus survives the war and ends up happily married to Tizzy (and after you finish your SSHG story!). If you make this DH-compliant, that would be cool. I like your Tizzy, and am glad you gave Minerva a loving husband and daughter. Thanks for posting!
| zule bean chapter 1 . 12/1/2009
Yay! Welcome back. I'm not ove for OC's who play a central role...but seeing as it is you, I'll come along for the ride.
| Moewe24aol.com chapter 1 . 12/1/2009
Nice to meet you again on this site... such a coincidence, really ;-)
Whether we'd like you to write more? Well, allright, if you must... No! Was just joking! In fact, I liked the whole chapter even much more than the teaser you gave me. Has anyone ever tried to put Minerva and Aberforth together, and moreover, to let them have a daughter? Surprise!
Oh my, she is so young and lively and active and curious and brave and wants to prove herself so desperately, I am afraid she will rush head over heals into something very dangerous quite soon.
You made it hurt/comfort, that is wonderful. And Severus' parents are both already dead. Ok, that is canon, I think. There are few romance stories (as far as I know) in which either of his parents is still alive and might intervene. That would be quite interesting I assume. But that is just a stray thought and has nothing to do with your story.
Yes, please, feel free to go on!
(Meinen Segen haste)
| catastrophecolly chapter 1 . 12/1/2009
very interesting premise. I think I would be interested in seeing how you take this!
| wandamarie chapter 1 . 12/1/2009
IT WAS A GOOD ONE THANKS CANT WANT TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER
| itat88 chapter 1 . 12/1/2009
I'd very much like you to continue :)
Severus in jungen Jahren hab ich bei dir ja noch nicht gelesen, aber ich muss sagen du triffst ihn schon sehr gut. Dass er den Vow leisten will und Albus ihm das untersagt ist für mich sehr realistisch. Dumbledore glaubt und vertraut ihm. Diese unerschütterliche Basis, die wir durch die ganzen Bücher immer wieder gehört haben, die von vielen angezweifelt wurde und jetzt in dieser Story aufgegriffen und dargestellt wird. Wie gesagt, sehr gut vorstellbar für mich, dass Dumbledore keinen Vow haben möchte an dieser Stelle.
Und Tizzy mag ich jetzt schon :) Aber bisher bin ich more intrigued mit "young" Severus. Mehr als mit dem "alten" in deinen bisherigen FF wenn ich ehrlich bin. Und sein oath am Ende... hat sadness und Wille und auch die Sorge um Lily. captures quite a lot, finde ich.
first review, I hope.