Reviews for Innocence Lost
Brume7 chapter 2 . 12/3/2009

This chapter was quite interesting, I liked it...

As for the lenght of the chapters, I don't have an opinion... I think you should do what is easier for you...

Eleantris chapter 2 . 12/3/2009
A brilliant chapter again, I'm really getting into this and am loving Tizzy's character. I don't really mind about the chapter choice, do what you're comfortable with. X D
Slinkiee chapter 2 . 12/3/2009
You have depicted Severus' desperation to protect Lily very well. Not sure where Tuzzy will end up fitting into the story but I am sure you will not disappoint us.
notjustme22 chapter 2 . 12/3/2009
„poor bloke“ – ja, ich möchte auch nicht in seiner Haut stecken; Lily verdient es absolut nicht , das Severus das alles für sie tut...

ich hab nichts gegen kurze Kapitel (bin also für häufige Updates), aber im Moment frage ich mich, woher Du die Energie nimmst, gleich zwei Geschichten täglich upzudaten ;)
sky17 chapter 2 . 12/2/2009
I luv this story! Your writing and character insight is fantastic!
watin77 chapter 2 . 12/2/2009
well... i'd prefer quality (not that your quality is bad or anything! it's superb, but such short chapters just don't seem like they would work for this fic) and length over rapid updates. so, longer chapters please?

aside from that, i wanted to tell you that currently you are now officially my favorite HP FFnet author-two great fics that are updated on a regular basis? it's like mana from heaven. thanks so much!
notwritten chapter 2 . 12/2/2009
Longer chapters please. Good chapter. Keep smiling. :-)
wandamarie chapter 2 . 12/2/2009
calmest-tempest chapter 2 . 12/2/2009
Already, I'm enthralled with your story! I love the way that you develop your characters and your style of writing just speaks to me. I've read many of your other stories and have likewise been thrilled! Keep it up!
Aurelia Rose chapter 1 . 12/2/2009
This is interesting...

Continue if you please.

- AR
Brume7 chapter 1 . 12/2/2009
Hi again!

I 'm a reader of "from the corner" so, when I saw your new fic, I just went to read it...

I liked this first chapter! There are already characters I like, Dumbledore, McGonagall, and Severus... And your new character, Tizzy, seems interesting... I think it's a good idea to begin this story when you did it, when Severus went to see Albus. I believe I haven't read this sort of fic but it seems a good idea... So, I 'm very interested in this new fic, and would like you to continue...

French-Lo chapter 1 . 12/2/2009
Interesting first chapter! Abe and Minerva are back! great!
Eleantris chapter 1 . 12/2/2009
I've never actually read a Severus/OC story before but when this came through as I've got you on author alert, I thought It would be worth a look, especially since it's you. And I have to say - I like it! A great start to the story and I'm really looking forward to see what happens. X D
Mother of Tears chapter 1 . 12/2/2009
Very, very interesting. And it's true, I don't tend to read OC fics, but this one sounds intriguing. Besides, i just like your writing. You could probably write anything and I'd follow it. i'd also say don't let it go to your head, but I know most fanfic writers are unsung heros. We need all the encouragement we can get! So bask in it. You aught to be a pro writer, you know that? Keep the chapters coming!
Aletto chapter 1 . 12/2/2009
wow! so Minerva and Abe have a daughter and you called her like one of the Erinyes.. I like it!

I like your works, as always.. so.. good writing, can't wait to read more and see how the story goes! :D
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