|Reviews for What We Were|
| Sagebeth chapter 3 . 1/18/2010
! love it
| Shineera chapter 2 . 1/18/2010
This entire chapter made me want to read every single one of your stories because... well. It's. Just. Plain. Awesome :D I laughed all the way through it and in the right spots of the story as well. That's some great writing there and I'm definitely hoping to see more of this particular one... well now, to start all the others :D
| Malaia chapter 3 . 1/18/2010
Dammit ( I didn't want to read this... I told myself I wouldn't because it's too sad for me and, yes, I'm a total sap. A completely unapologetic whiny happy-endings gal (and *smacks dirty minded noses not /that. kind of happy ending.
But then it was YOUR writing and gdi I was out of WWB chapters and *miffed* now I read it and am all sad and (.
I both love and hate you right now *whimper*.
| StargazingLily chapter 3 . 1/17/2010
This is so unbelievably fluffy and sugary! Thank you for writing it.
| socialkombat chapter 3 . 1/17/2010
Wow - I just love the voice of your characters and the inner voice you've given Alistair! It is so natural and believable. Keep up the good work, I can't wait for more!
| Fairy Skull chapter 3 . 1/17/2010
I Loved this chapter and I can't wait for more!XD
| Dasque chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
This is probably the most enjoyable thing I've ever read in my life.
| Hunter.48 chapter 3 . 1/17/2010
Haha, Awesome :) I love it when he says Bwuh? XD
| impsy chapter 3 . 1/17/2010
Wah! Alistair! So precious and awkward! And I'm a little sad reading this because I know it doesn't end happily, but I hope you don't mind if I put my fingers in my ears and yell "LA LA LA NOT LISTENING" and pretend that their adorable love lasts forever. Not that I don't love Cullen because I do, but oh Alistair, you are too cute. :3
Sorry for all that fangirling! Loved this chapter, I thought that confession of love was absolutely perfect, and their banter is just brilliant.
Thank you for sharing!
| The Odd Little Turtle chapter 3 . 1/17/2010
At her quizzical look, he continues, mood buoying a little, “Come on. You think any army’s going to be all that interested in fighting with everyone’s underpants on fire?”
Best line EVER.
This story is so cute! Glad you updated!
| Quillweave chapter 3 . 1/17/2010
I think you just rotted all my teeth out with how sweet this is. :3 Well done!
| The Odd Little Turtle chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
This piece needs some more chapters. It is to cute! (Also, I am really, really enjoying What We Become)
| Anonymous Echo chapter 2 . 1/13/2010
This is such an Alistair piece. I love it. XD
| Princess Fawna chapter 2 . 1/5/2010
I just LOVE your writing style. It is just...awesome.
| x.goodbye.x chapter 2 . 1/3/2010
"You’re leaving me here, by myself in the castle in loneliness and drunkitude?”
LOL! SO many great lines in this story! I was laughing almost the entire time while reading this. And YES drunken Alistair is "awesome"! XD
I've recently read "What We Become" and just now found "What We Were" and "What We Are". This story is spectacular on its own but had so much more meaning after reading the others. You truly have a knack for capturing the personality of the characters. I am in awe! And now, even more than before, very much a fan!