Reviews for What We Were
naomis8329 chapter 13 . 9/24/2012
Beautifully written full of emotion and filling my head with images and sounds, more so than we fell and see in the game itself. The pain and horror of what was done to the citizens of Ferelden, the anger and mistrust, the love between a man and a woman, and the knowing that no matter what, duty comes first.

Wonderful. Thank you
Naomi xxx
tjadis chapter 13 . 9/24/2012
I am so excited to hear that you've finished this! And poor Alistair-you've really captured how overwhelmed he has to be by what happens at the Landsmeet.
GlysMari chapter 6 . 8/27/2012
"Nobody gets left behind,"... You bet your bippy Skippy!
Helena Everbreeze chapter 12 . 4/22/2012
Hi there, I am really enjoying this story, I love the game and the couple. You have done a great job in conveying their feelings please keep writing!
JessicaJones chapter 12 . 4/19/2012
Yay more!

I truly adore your Alistair voice. Always. I especially like in this bit how he goes directly from sweet and adorable to rather menacing when talking about how he, personally, wants to kill Loghain. It's rather creepy.

And then the ending... they are so sweet together AHH WHY DO YOU MAKE ME LOVE THEM SO MUCH. How I am dreading this Landsmeet, painfully, even though of course I know what happens.
Wasagi chapter 12 . 4/16/2012
Your portrayal of Alistair is amazingly good. I love it and this story. XD

I found you through tumblr when I saw someone say that they read all your Amell x Cullen fics, and since that's my current favourite pairing I decided to give it a go and see what your stories were like. Thank god I did...and now Alistair x Amell is slowly creeping up there XD.

Update soon :)
1Scarylady chapter 12 . 4/13/2012
What stands out really strongly here is that your 'unhardened Alistair' voice is absolutely perfect.
Dasque chapter 12 . 4/13/2012
So filled with "Yay, update!" right now.

I particularly loved the parts with Therrin trying to get into armor and the consideration of them both being at the Circle Tower. Don't worry, Therrin-I'm sure he would have at least checked to make sure you were still breathing before stepping over you.

I have to say, even though the end of this story is going to *hurt*, I'm still really looking forward to it. Especially seeing the Landsmeet through Alistair's eyes.

Wonderful work, as always.
naomis8329 chapter 12 . 4/12/2012
How a chapter which is supposed to be serious can make me smile all the way through is beyond me lol. From beginning to the end I've grinned all the way through it.

To know that they will not be able to stay together is heart-rending but inevitable, but to know that they will find love with others more suited to each other is heart warming to be sure.

Thank you for continuing this honey, missed you.

Naomi xxx
Vaniel chapter 11 . 4/11/2012
Dude, what's the hold up? It's been the better part of six months now.
Velanna chapter 1 . 4/7/2012
What's the hold up? It's been months since the last update.
stainglasspeppermint chapter 1 . 4/4/2012
This story is ruined for me as it has no ending.
Verris chapter 11 . 2/26/2012
More, please? It's been almost four months? I don't want to see this quality work rushed, but...don't let it die, either?
lynn-writer chapter 5 . 1/12/2012
"Can I do things to you with my manly bits?"


ninaluvsathena chapter 11 . 12/18/2011
Just wanted to say I love this and I can't wait for more :)
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