Reviews for Not so Broken Inside
BlackStarRabbit chapter 9 . 5/6/2014
Omygosh! I really love your story! And I also super duper love the ending!couldn't ask for a better ending. You're a great writer :)
heart-of-moonlight chapter 5 . 6/21/2013
I'm greatly enjoying your story :3
Nice plot and the characters seem to be their own characters and no OCness..
One thin I'm confused about.. I just finished reading chapter 5, when Naomi wakes up from her dream.. Why does she shout?
The dream isn't even scary..
Other than that.. Love your story!
Guest chapter 9 . 6/17/2013
woodlandfairykirk chapter 9 . 10/17/2012
I love the OC, and Hunny was adorable(:
BerserkerNobody chapter 9 . 8/17/2012
YAY! I LOVE THIS STORY SOOOOO MUCH. sorry my caps locks is sticking nowdays...
Empathos chapter 4 . 7/11/2011
I love Hit the Floor. *_*

RisingXxLawliet chapter 9 . 6/20/2011
Great story! I really like how you decided to make the character, both background and development wise. Awesome story and not at all Mary Sue-ish!
chocolatecheesecake23 chapter 9 . 6/8/2011
CUTE! XD poor naomi though to have to go thru all that...Dx and just an fyi, "you're" means "you are" and "your" is possessive like "your mom"

p.s. i loved how hunny and she were the couple - theyre adorable XD
Kuraitsuki Tukiko chapter 9 . 2/12/2011
Lawl. I've always kinda wanted to pee on one of those sticks and get the little pink plus, but I'm male, so I don't think that'll happen... hehe...he...
DemonOfTheRain666 chapter 9 . 2/6/2011
All I can say is...


This story was so awesome!

All of the problems that Naomi had were horrible, and I felt bad for her! But I guess everything paid off in the end! :)

This was a really good story, I really liked it :)

If you DO create a sequel, I'll be sure to read it!
DemonOfTheRain666 chapter 3 . 2/5/2011
Awesome chapter, and I feel like Takashi is going to do something to Naomi, like talk to her about if she hurts Honey or steals or anything he'll hurt her...

Just a feeling! :) With my luck, I'm probably wrong. Haha.

Anyways, I think that this story is very well developed and I'm wondering if Naomi is going to somehow come face-to-face with her parents again in the future...
DemonOfTheRain666 chapter 2 . 2/5/2011
I love how the chapters are so long and they have good grammar and spelling! And I love the name Naomi, I'm using it in a fan-fiction I haven't posted yet! It's a great name :)
DemonOfTheRain666 chapter 1 . 2/5/2011
Aww, I feel so bad for the main character! I would've done the same thing that she did, and I feel bad because of her severe naiveness.

This story has great potential, and I'm going to keep reading it! Great job on the prologue.
Gaara'sLover95 chapter 9 . 1/29/2011
Omg. I can't believe that this story is Awsome :D I really wish for a sequel.
ILoveReadingAndWriting chapter 9 . 1/27/2011
Yeh! I love this story! It's so kawaii!
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