|Reviews for Father|
| Aria Breuer chapter 1 . 4/4/2013
I can feel the emotions Brianna has towards Dustfinger's leave to his disappearance and return. I can see why Brianna would think and say these things towards her father.
Well done. I liked reading this poem, right to the last line.
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
THIS IS AWESOME!
| Sauron Gorthaur chapter 1 . 3/29/2010
I am amazed that you could show so much emotion in such a so few words - the mark of a skilled poet. I love how each line shows a distinct emotion and your use of repetition, both of the title word "Father" and the structure of the lines, is extremely well done. I love how you go all the way through the tilogy, showing Brianna's feelings at each point. It seems that Brianna is not a character who gets much time in the actual trilogy - so I am glad that you gave her a chance to speak through your poem.
This line was one of my favorites:
"What were you thinking, Father? You died for nothing." I think that sums up Brianna's feelings about Dustfinger's death so well, that it was a waste. I can feel her anger through this line so well.
The last two lines were also beautiful and a wonderful conclusion, the forgiveness and hope that Brianna now feels.
Fantastic, lovely, emotional poem. Brianna is a complicated character, but I think you showed her skillfully and beautifully. Keep on writing!
| anime-lovin'-freak chapter 1 . 1/11/2010
ohmyword that was so CUTE! i loved it
| Scooter12345 chapter 1 . 12/26/2009
This is rather sweet, I like it.
| Welcome2DaHouseOfFun chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
Did like, keep writing! I really love my dustbunny and seeing him in a soppy light!