|Reviews for The Catholic and The Rebel|
| Guest chapter 9 . 9/26/2013
The one element that could derail the plot and render Roxas's father out of the picture: call the police. I'm surprised no one does that ever. It doesn't seem like it's ever brought up either.
Other than that, it's a good story
| seventyfiveskinny chapter 31 . 8/18/2013
I just want you to know I've read this story probably a million times and it really is my favorite! Your writing is really good and I wish I was famous or rich and could get this published and make a movie and everyone would fucking live this shitttt. Omggggg. 33333333
| Nasciturus chapter 30 . 6/29/2013
I love this fanfic, it was one of the first fanfiction in english that i have read. :)
| Theadle chapter 1 . 6/21/2013
I know I've already reviewed this once, but I can't help but do so again. This is one of my top three fanficitons, and that is saying something considering the other two are Midnight Memories and Demilitarized Zone. This is a fantastic fic with characters clearly cut and given such loving care, they feel almost completely human.
for those looking at this review, congratulations on finding this fic. I can't begin to describe how much I enjoyed this fic. Thank you for giving us this story Sharmander, and I really really really hope you are able to give us more in the future. Much love.
| Reviews to Master chapter 10 . 5/17/2013
Ack! You were in THAT building?! I hope you're alright or nothing bad happened with anyone! That wouldn't be too good.
Aw...they finally kissed. But, and it kills me to say, this is falling into the pit of Clichéville. I know, I'm a picky reader but yeah. Not really feeling it anymore. I mean, it's cute don't get me wrong but I pretty much got the whole story figured out by now. It was nice while it lasted though! :D Nice job on the story.
I'll see you around.
| Reviews to Master chapter 9 . 5/16/2013
Icky stress sucks ass. But you know what doesn't? Fluff. Akuroku fluff to be specific.
| Reviews to Master chapter 8 . 5/16/2013
I SEE IT WITH EXTREME CLARITY!
Mass IS boring. Every freaking time I go I'm like KILL ME NOW! I mean, it's good to go but it's like they're trying to put you to sleep instead of teach you the rights of the good word.
| Reviews to Master chapter 7 . 5/16/2013
I dunno. Sex? Lung cancer? Pregnant? The possiblities are endless!
Thinking Freely for Dummies. Axel should be an author.
| Reviews to Master chapter 6 . 5/16/2013
Oh no...that's what I was wondering too. *wary expression* What do you have up your sleeve?
Forgive them Roxas, they just did that because of what you said to Axel.
| Reviews to Master chapter 5 . 5/16/2013
I don't know what happened to that man, and I'm not going to justify his horrible actions, but I have pity on him.
| Reviews to Master chapter 4 . 5/16/2013
Honestly, I'm a Catholic too and a strong believer in our Lord, but this is just ridiculous. God made us who we are just the way we are so why would he condemn us if he made us this way? Poor baby.
| Reviews to Master chapter 3 . 5/16/2013
Damn. Poor Roxas indeed. Boy doesn't know any better you know?
| Reviews to Master chapter 2 . 5/16/2013
Wow. What a dick. But there's a reason a dick is a dick. Maybe something happened to the dick in the army to make him a dick. 'Cause you know, dick things happen to dicks to make them dicks.
| Reviews to Master chapter 1 . 5/16/2013
Your first huh? Well, looks like it's one helluva story with all those reviews huh?
Ah, the classic story of the good boy and the rebel falling in love only to be disapproved of the person Goody Two Shoes looks up the most. The only fear I have is that it'll be the same cliché stuff I always read and see, not that this isn't a good start. Just a little...'mixing up' would do nicely you know?
And without further ado, our journey into the story of sinful youthful love.
| Elizabeth Anne19 chapter 31 . 5/1/2013
Alright I've been waiting until I finished this to review and Oh My Loving- I love this story. This is truly a brilliant piece of literature I think there were a few small spelling mistakes, but the sheer amazingness of this story just blew that right out of the water. it gave me chills, it pulled me in and it made me want to come back.
Thank you very much for this brilliant tale of a Catholic and a Rebel, and I have to go add this to my favorites!