Reviews for Early Return
TWINS96 chapter 15 . 3/27/2011
Rilyy tho when he said that us b better off dead all she did was look at him and say I can't believe u we'd that

I would have threw a screw driver at sense he's alot stronger and how she left Edward to go with jacob I wuda bin pissed at her because all he was doing was trying to protect her n she already new that Victoria was back when the wolves was chasesen her in new moon
Emmauk26 chapter 1 . 9/1/2010
WOW,OME HOT HOT HOT LOVE IT hehe update really soon.
FreaKiki chapter 12 . 8/1/2010
Can Edward really blame her for having fantasies about Jake, i mean come on he is like sinfully drop dead smokin' hot. I loved the idea about the car too.
FreaKiki chapter 13 . 8/1/2010
ALICE! I am so glad you did a chapter from her perspective! Poor girl can't even enjoy sex without visions.
FreaKiki chapter 14 . 8/1/2010
I loved this chapter. I just adore Emmett! I really hope you continue on
FreaKiki chapter 8 . 8/1/2010
Oh i hope Rose smacks Em for that comment at the end. I really liked this chapter about finding out she pregnant and her "cravings". lol
FreaKiki chapter 7 . 8/1/2010
Oh i am sure he has indeed unleashed a monster. I liked the idea of the journal, but i have to agree with Edward when he says what kinda quack prescribes porn to an 18 year old girl.
FreaKiki chapter 5 . 8/1/2010
I am so glad you incorporated the "Oh, for the love of all that's holy!" line. Its my favorite. lol
FreaKiki chapter 4 . 8/1/2010
Wow, i liked seeing this all from Bella's POV.
FreaKiki chapter 2 . 7/31/2010
Damn this is good! I wish S. Meyer had your kind of imagination! I love that she calls him lover-boy. The second she said it i thought of Mickey and Slyvia's Love is Strange from Dirty Dancing. lol
moore8879 chapter 14 . 6/27/2010
This was a totally hot story. I really enjoyed reading this.
Emmauk26 chapter 14 . 1/10/2010
hehe, I tottally LOVED these two chapters, fantastic job, really enjoyed hearing the diff pov's, keep it up, can't wait to read more.
Stephii.j chapter 8 . 12/9/2009
love it
bmthespian chapter 14 . 12/9/2009
Great story. I look forward to reading more
Princess Mishawaka chapter 14 . 12/9/2009
Lori you know how much I love your stories. this is a very, very good one. You can really write the naughty stuff. Thank you. POST SOON
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