Reviews for Introvenient
occasionallywrite chapter 1 . 4/8/2016
So incredible!
KatieLyn chapter 1 . 2/4/2016
This was really beautiful. Oddly enough had I been Spock or Kirk, I would have walked away from it for even longer than Spock took to meditate on the answer he wanted to give Jim. Some things are just too much, and a T'hy'la bond seems to be one of those things. I would have needed a few weeks at the beach to process the sheer awesomeness of it all. The way you wrote of the T'hy'la bond really conveyed the immensity of it.
Izlandi chapter 1 . 12/28/2015
You have to continue this, with the other movie (: I just love this POV c:
Elaine du Lac chapter 1 . 3/28/2014
This is beautiful and so eloquently written, both poetic and perfectly Spock. When I first encountered the second person pronoun I was like, "uh oh, I don't think this will work out too well." But the more I read, the more surprised and awed I became at how well you've delved into Spock's point of view, how deeply you were able to write of his thoughts and feelings. In fact, reading this, it felt as if I, the reader, did a mind meld with Spock himself and we are seeing through his eyes, feeling what he feels. Well done! Bravo! Standing ovation! I'd ask for an encore but I hear you did just that from Jim's POV this time. I'll go read it now, shall I?
Guest chapter 1 . 10/3/2013
This was well-written, gorgeous, and insightful. Thank you.
sami1010220 chapter 1 . 4/19/2013
Aww, fantastic job!
Nichalia chapter 1 . 5/20/2012
Interesting perspective!
Secret Thought chapter 1 . 4/28/2012
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Silvanesti chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
Very good. Well written with beautiful language.
Killingmemory chapter 1 . 4/28/2011
Love this story. You write Spock so perfectly, manage to balance his love and loneliness with the steadiness of his character, without exaggeration, and the result is just so beautifully written. The one thing that I would watch out for is that you occasionally slip into the present tense, when I'm pretty sure you meant to be speaking of past states or events. Didn't really detract from the beauty of the story, though.

This is definitely going on my favorites now. Thanks for writing!
Dark Angel's Blue Fire chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
Loved the story thanks for sharing xx
XyaoixheavenX chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
That was so beautiful and so - for lack of a better way to describe it - Spock-like. Very well done! I'm loving this so hard right now~
Doni chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
Beautiful and touching. Wonderful work.
Dysgrammatophobia chapter 1 . 9/9/2010
How beautiful. Thanks for sharing.
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