Reviews for The Road to Hell
Southerncross1 chapter 7 . 3/12
This is a great story; with an interesting and complex plot and authentic character voices. I can see how this could be easily adapted into a script for an episode, and wouldn’t we like to see that! The insight into the procreation of the wraith fits well with the few other facts we know. Also Todd’s reaction to the use of the gift to torture and turn victims is quite believable and enhances his character as not quite a “ good “ wraith, but one who has a different code of honour. I really enjoyed the description of the race and it was nice to think John and Ronan might have some time off to have some fun together. The destruction of the settlement and culling of the people was more devastating when it became obvious they had been betrayed. One wonders if the race would ever be run again; another casualty of wraith domination.

Thank you for a very entertaining story. I think this was my third time reading it.
SuperMom1 chapter 7 . 5/17/2020
I really loved this story. I don't tend to read to many Ronon and Sheppard stories, but this was well written. It's definitely been added to my favorites.
SuperMom1 chapter 1 . 5/17/2020
I absolutely loved the bonding time for Ronon and Sheppard in this chapter, of course the Wraith would have to show up and destroy their fun.
Iuvsbruce chapter 7 . 11/10/2018
I've read this before and will read it again eventually! This story is incredible! You have all the characters exact! Thank you so very much for this amazing story!
sheppardlover928 chapter 7 . 2/3/2013
Excellent, excellent story!, Lots of poor Shep and Ronon whump! Love the team dynamics and how they finally overcome Thierry trauma...very canon and very, very well-written!
lanteanscribe chapter 7 . 9/7/2010
Totally awesome story so wonderfully written! Thanks for writing and sharing!
Jammeke chapter 7 . 4/23/2010
Thank you for posting such a wonderful story. I loved it - all of it. The Ronon/John friendship, the concern of everyone back on Atlantis, the race, the wraith kids(!), the concept of feeding and interrogation lessons (pure brillianse right there), John asking Ronon to kill him and vice versa, Todd, Todd's respect and admiration for Sheppard on some level, the canoe instructions(!), John's phobia of people touching his chest.

Oh, and everything else. ;-) I'm sure I left a lot of things out. Thanks again for sharing such a touching story with us.

~Jammeke
KGBOOTH chapter 7 . 1/22/2010
Enjoyed the adventure, to true, to real. Rejoiced in the next canoe trip the team made. I would love to be there when Ronan and McKay starting building their canoe.
jayni1000 chapter 7 . 12/30/2009
wow! amazing story! ty for sharing :)
Obsessed Pam chapter 7 . 12/28/2009
A story to be remembered and reread with intense pleasure, possibly with a little less urgency, now that my heartbeat has slowly returned to its normal rhythm.

I applaud long and hard your skills as a gifted writer and 2010 is looking good knowing you'll be returning to gift us with your skills. Thank you!
Obsessed Pam chapter 6 . 12/28/2009
Thrilling, absolutely thrilling! The feeding and subsequent withdrawal were described so vividly that I was cringing throughout!
Obsessed Pam chapter 5 . 12/28/2009
Such an agonizing dilemma to be faced by John - killing infant Wraith. And now he's in the position Ronon endured in the past. We need a quick rescue!
Obsessed Pam chapter 4 . 12/28/2009
Poor John. It's hard to think that the situation can worsen and yet it has a hundred fold. I can literally feel the shivers of loathing that must be running up and down his spine...
Red Tigress chapter 7 . 12/26/2009
I loved this story. I was especially pleased with how well you wrote Ronon AND Sheppard's angst, usually most people can only get one or the other, or they don't go as in depth with Ronon as one might hope. The plot was engaging too, not just another "lost in the woods" type story, you touched on some great subjects. I also work at a canoeing camp, and was pretty impressed with your detail about the initial canoe adventure. ;) I hope to see more Ronon-Sheppard or just general team stories (since you also did awesomely at writing McKay and Teyla) in the future.
Scotius chapter 7 . 12/22/2009
Loved it! :) Especially those parts which creeped me out totally lol. And your Todd is pure win.
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