Reviews for Fictionista Workshop WitFit Writing Prompts
Guest chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
That was interesting, heavy but interesting, ty
hpdude-4life chapter 4 . 2/26/2010

damn u victoria!

and thid norris guy...

dnt worry edward and alice!

ull find bella.

u hav to..
hpdude-4life chapter 3 . 2/26/2010

whos this matthews lady?

whats edward cullen ever done 2 u?

whats that got 2 do with ur dad?

why is this detective biased?

and wheres bella?
hpdude-4life chapter 2 . 2/26/2010

just go back 2 her man!

and stop making me upset!

hpdude-4life chapter 1 . 2/26/2010
i love the way uve written this story.

im was so happy at the start.

but then, i started 2 get it...

bella's missing.

and edward's broken.

BLilTXgirl chapter 2 . 1/31/2010
I hate seeing Edward in such pain and torment, but I loved how you incorporated parts of New Moon. Edward having already decided how he will die even though Bella is still among the living. It shows how much he's thought about it.
silly bj chapter 4 . 1/19/2010
You go Alice.
silly bj chapter 3 . 1/19/2010
You're killing me.
silly bj chapter 2 . 1/19/2010
That just broke my fucking heart and made me cry.
silly bj chapter 1 . 1/19/2010
5 words...I love your work!
BittenBee chapter 3 . 1/12/2010

The details of every glance and wonder is so vivid here. You've managed to take a very complicated thing like Love and War and simplify it into something sacred and honest.

I love this.
latuacantante4him chapter 6 . 1/4/2010
Enjoyed it.
betsmecullen chapter 5 . 1/1/2010
Is Det. Norris' first name Chuck?

Hoping Alice actually does get to rescue Bella.

Please send out the next update soon.
fangbang chapter 6 . 12/29/2009
Considering that these drabbles have been written with no editing they are ridiculously good! You amaze me with your way with words and I thoroughly enjoyed each and every one.

I especially like the one set around the war, probably because I'm a softy at heart (and the steamy ending);)

I'm desperate to know what'll happen to kidnapped Bella; you're really killing me here!

ecullen'sgirl chapter 4 . 12/25/2009
Poor Edward.
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