Reviews for Foundling
Guest chapter 22 . 8/18
Like the creative take on tbe characters
liliCartMan chapter 5 . 8/18
VROOOOM! Harry on the broom :D :D :D well, inherited I don't know, I am quite reluctant in calling genetics in a speech, it sounds a little like tracing a person's "destiny" with no changes, but in this case I can't find another word for it. I anyway can't help admiring this calm and fair Snape, treating Harry as the children he is, not James' son
liliCartMan chapter 17 . 8/17
oops! in putting looking for the Mark and the trial you have a point: two possible elements that would change Sirius' story in the canon. Beside Rowling contradicts herself too: at a certain point Sirius says "I saw (someone that I can't remember) at the trial for James' and Lily's death" but in another point he says "I was condemned without a trial".
Glad to see that Sev is capable of looking for a proof instead of calling a person bad, good, culprit... immediately, as he likes doing in the books. In the 3rd one Sev has the huge fault of wanting to give Dementors Sirius without listening to the Animagus' version, maybe in this version things are different because Black is already in jail and Sev must face the legal matter of the godfather? I like it and after all, Sirius is showing his reasons not to join Voldemort, even if a doubt is coming: is he speaking so badly about what Pettigrew was at school, because of the rage for having Pettigrew betrayed him, or did already the teenage Sirius have a so low opinion about Pettigrew?
HA HA HA HAAAAA! take this you filthy traitor son of a b**** let's see if you like Azkaban!
SIRIUS oooh please let's not speak about female dogs
SNAPE (chuckles)
ME mmm! I could have still the idea of calling you Filius Canius (pun...) back, for calling you Snape Snivellus
SNAPE so strong...
ME: I am keeping an eye on you both!
liliCartMan chapter 4 . 8/17
no call to the police? an interesting point, that could be an idea: analizing the Dursleys' reaction to Harry's disappearing
the newspaper :D :D :D :D :D and well, Snape can't be the idiot we know yet, with Harry who showed a mere, genuine child curiosity and no more (the "arrogance" and "laziness" that Severus says in the books). Especially, I like the teacher's calm attitude in this first day, and giving Harry some attention and something to introduce the child properly to magic: the book, basic information as much as I see in ch.5 too...
liliCartMan chapter 2 . 8/17
mmm what a pleasure is seeing Severus being calm and without the usual bias against Harry: nice idea, this of making him interact with Harry without knowing the child yet and now that he discovered who Harry is, what should he do? judge the boy by his attitude? he hasn't seen it yet, vs Hogwarts (UHM! at Hogwarts actually he had already decided was a little James, attitude or not...). by his parents? it would be a terrible point, maybe coherent with Severus, maybe not
bookworm661 chapter 22 . 5/17
This is really good. I hope you are able to update soon. I want to know what happens next. How does Lucius react to Sirius' release? Does Draco meet Harry and if so how do they get along? What is Harry's reaction to the Weasleys and the Burrow? Will he meet Hermione before Hogwarts?
Serpent91 chapter 22 . 3/28
Well written indeed!
njferrell chapter 22 . 2/22
I like that Sirius is out. And, that he and Severus are going to raise Harry together. With Remus around.
It was nice of Severus to set it for the Weasleys to take the reward for Peter. And it helps keep his cover.
They should get Harry a pet.
LittleMissHugALot chapter 22 . 2/13
I am enjoying this. Please update soon. :-)
Traveling Muse chapter 22 . 12/18/2015
That would be an interesting segway to meet the Grangers.
Saissa chapter 22 . 11/28/2015
I assume you have lost your muse again since it has been well over a year since this was last updated.

A great pity because this was BRILLIANT. I was really enjoying it!
Fenris Jin chapter 1 . 10/6/2015
This was a sweet read.

It's nice to see Severus and Sirius being nice to each other. :)
savemyunicornclarence chapter 22 . 6/23/2015
I can't wait for more! Either way I hope you get your lovely muse back or some awesome writer will come and adopt it (is that what you meant?)

Anyways such a lovely and cute story! Really like how Sev and Siri are getting along.
guest chapter 2 . 6/5/2015
I don't know if you're still reading the reviews but how would Snape know it's actually the boy-who-lived there are many Harry Potters in the muggle world
Aria1985 chapter 22 . 5/21/2015
Why, oh, why the good fanfics are unfinished?
I'm crying with dismay.

Thank you, dear author, for such a good heroes!
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