Reviews for As The Pendulum Swings
twistedthinking3 chapter 1 . 10/12/2013
Ahh... I felt sorry for Kagami even though I am a BIG RenRuki fan...
Kira The Forgotten chapter 1 . 3/25/2010
Yemi Hikari - You have problems. End of Story, overly critical. It's called a FanFic for a reason.

Anyway, awsome story. Love the character and can't wait until the full story comes out... or has it? I must check now.

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DarkFlame Alchemist chapter 1 . 12/8/2009
This was good can't wait for the story
Ashley chapter 1 . 12/7/2009
Aw. I feel so bad for her. But that was so cute! I love your character. I can't wait to read your other story with her. It is going to be hilarious!
Bet-You-Can-Guess-Who-This-Is chapter 1 . 12/2/2009
And you said you can't write in third person. Psh.

Sincerely,

Fictional-Character-Slut
Yemi Hikari chapter 1 . 12/2/2009
1.) I think that you forgot the fact that Renji's best friend in the academy, Kira, just so happened to be from a nobel family. Not only does he not share the same view point as Kagami, he would have rebuted her comments about the nobels by telling her that not all of them were bad, because he would have felt the need to defend Kira.

2.) This one is my personal opinion, but I doubt that Renji would hold someones hands. He isn't 'romantic' for one thing, and he would probabbly be along the line of, if you really want to get a tatoo... especully one that is the word 'strenght', you would need to suck it up a bit...

3.) Renji is not one of the characters one would see crying, even if he was drunk. Yelling, shouting, turning into a complete idiot, but crying... no.

4.) They graduated about thirty to fourty years before the current timeline. Why would Shawlong be showing himself in the real world at that time? His appearing might also have ruined Aizen's plans...

5.) If it was truely a handicap, would she have been able to make it to the third seat position? If she was able to, it isn't really a handicap, but something that is disfiguring... but the fact she is wallowing in self pity...

6.) Kinda... overly fluffy... and this is Renji we're talking about...

7.) Renji... is doing the healing? When there is healing kido... and he stinks at all forms of kido, and it would be more likely that Tessai, Urahara or Yourichi would be doing it? Because... Renji wouldn't likely know what he was doing...

8.) Hmm... Renji seems to be depending on someone elses strength... when he says that he wouldn't be where he is today... not to mention, that is one of the statements that tends to be wedding story clique...