Reviews for Forward Motion
Minecraft Guardiansaiyan chapter 1 . 10/25/2014
McSpirk Friendship FTW!
Doni chapter 1 . 3/12/2011
That had to be cathardic for him. Nicely done.
Azamiko chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
XD We!
shadowninja-yuna chapter 1 . 1/11/2010
Oh Jim D:
Lady Merlin chapter 1 . 12/23/2009
Hi! My name is CJ (initials) and I'm addicted to Star Trek. I think we're very similar like that. I have zillions of ideas all over the place on tissue paper, on my desktop, emails, sms-es Everywhere! And I'm sorry but this one i couldn't connect to. As in, it was beautifully written (as usual) and the emotions were perfect, but I need some sort of closure on this, even though I'm the last person who should talk about closure. I just feel... betrayed, or something. Like I need a bit more, something to seal the ends together, if I'm making any sense. But apart from that, good job! :D


Lady Merlin
FanGirl2007 chapter 1 . 12/7/2009 this story. Great closure story as well as hints of beginning things.
Vulcan Wolf chapter 1 . 12/4/2009
Uh. Did Jim just burn his own house down? Out of spite? Holy cow! I really liked this! A little closure is good for the soul, and if my boy needs to get his closure by burning down his childhood home, that's just fine and dandy. Not that it was much of a home, though. I really really really liked this! Thank you!
Nostalgic Glitter chapter 1 . 12/3/2009

I liked that a lot. Thank you. :)