Reviews for Bad Day at School
MCR Killjoys chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
please update soon

Becky xxx
Tammy1234 chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
Next chapter plz
candyluvsu chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
Awww poor Jasper. Feeling as if he is being baby sat. Anyway, another great story. :)
marsbareater12 chapter 1 . 8/29/2010
Wow! Nice! Into these sort of stories now :)

wolfdog127 chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
:o poor jasper!
ThatOneQuirkyFangirl chapter 1 . 5/8/2010
Amazing! :)
Kitten008 chapter 1 . 1/28/2010
aw. you finished it there :-( are you going to write more?

please say you will . . . PLEASE?


skylynn chapter 1 . 12/19/2009
i love it
BellaMarieNicole chapter 1 . 12/14/2009
Poor Jazz... I just want to hug him! I enjoyed it very much

CAROLINA GREY chapter 1 . 12/6/2009
Wrandom Writer chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
Hello Terez,

I would like to start by saying that this is very well written piece. I was expecting more of a humorous story but I was just as satisfied with the seriousness of it all. Your writing really told the reader about the mood of the scene.

I would say that I want more of an explanation as to what actually happen, but I think that would ruin the subtlety of the story. You made this story just the right lenght, in my oppinion; not too long, and not too short. :)

The only picket that I have is that his eyes wouldn't be red after just one kill. I just thought that you should be aware of that. It isn't really a big deal if you change it or not. ~''~ The story is still amazing!

Overall, very well written and I enjoyed it very much.

Keep Writing,

annsteph chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
You did a very nice job on this story. It has a great beginning and is a well written piece. Thanks for posting and hopefully it has more chapters to read.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
AW! this is adorably sad. This is the deffinition of...great. yes the adjective i chose was great, icant think of another one! sue me! anyway, i really love this !
myppe chapter 1 . 12/3/2009
OMG! that was so sad..poor Jasper, always struggling..
Realynn8 chapter 1 . 12/3/2009
You're on a roll, aren't you. :) Again, great story.
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