|Reviews for Fictionista WitFit Challenge|
| erika shoval chapter 6 . 12/12/2009
Your story is original. I love how you write.
| ericastwilight chapter 6 . 12/12/2009
Those are some thin walls to be able to hear chuckling and possibly he heard her cry and chose something more upbeat. This was a wonderful edition for your WitFit challenge.
| jro.jro.jro chapter 6 . 12/12/2009
this one is perfect and makes me want to get to know the characters better. it has potential for a continuation! wink, wink
| naughtylovr chapter 5 . 12/11/2009
is this real? like what you feel? i think it's cool when we get to know authors better :)
| naughtylovr chapter 4 . 12/11/2009
oh subtly sexy ;)
| naughtylovr chapter 3 . 12/11/2009
white is pretty cool. i like how you alternate with short and long chapters it's really cool :)
| naughtylovr chapter 2 . 12/11/2009
yum i like this a lot :)
| naughtylovr chapter 1 . 12/11/2009
oh lucky break indeed :)
| TeamJakeBella chapter 2 . 12/9/2009
bad bad bad vamps
| TeamJakeBella chapter 4 . 12/9/2009
going back to the islands lucky girl
| LoveForReading chapter 5 . 12/9/2009
Wow. Very powerful for someone so young. I really respect that you don't have any resentment and you're not placing fault on anyone. Very beautiful.
| LoveForReading chapter 4 . 12/9/2009
I like the subtle words. It's sexy, but not trashy sexy.
| LoveForReading chapter 3 . 12/9/2009
I like white, as well. :)
| LoveForReading chapter 2 . 12/9/2009
I think this was really cute. I normally don't like anything canon Breaking Dawn, but I liked that it wasn't pointedly on Renesmee, rather, it projected Edward and Bella.
| LoveForReading chapter 1 . 12/9/2009
This was really cute, dear. Seeing as you're a senior, do you feel that excitement when you send in applications?