|Reviews for Fictionista Wrkshp Dec 2009 Daily WitFit Prompts|
| Babette12 chapter 12 . 12/13/2009
Nothing says 'I love you' like accidental electrocution? Oh, that made me laugh this morning, when I've woken up far too early!
And the hope begins! Yes, I still want to smack him, but I do believe in repentance, and that everyone deserves forgiveness. Just, some things take more groveling than others.
I love how you're working the prompts into this mini-story you have going. That takes some real imagination and intelligence! I'm so impressed.
| Twilightobsessed09 chapter 11 . 12/12/2009
As much as it pleases me on one hand that he's experiencing this pain as it was well deserved because he brought that shit on himself, I can't help but feel sorry for him also.
I'm sucker for HEA when it to these two, so I hope they can find it.
And if he even considers doing that again, it'll only be because he has wondered what it would be like to be a eunuch...
Left pondering though what is he saw that could be of assistance to his case? hm...
| Twilightobsessed09 chapter 10 . 12/12/2009
This made me laugh so much..
| Twilightobsessed09 chapter 9 . 12/12/2009
Curiosity killed the cat, Edward...
| Twilightobsessed09 chapter 8 . 12/12/2009
Thanks for making Jess more likable in this..
Laughter is indeed the best medicine but not in Bella's case..
| LovesTwilightFanFics83 chapter 11 . 12/12/2009
i really do love where this story is going...i hope to read what Bella has been up to in the past months. and i know Edward has to do something HUGE to get her back...if that is the kind of story you're going for...a happily ever after. i'll never stop saying how much i love this story and your writing
| Creampuf99 chapter 11 . 12/12/2009
damn that was a messed up place to end that one.
I know Cheatward is an ass and a jerk and all but I will always have a soft spot for Edward. As uncharacteristic as cheating is for him I still feel his pain.
| BellsNWhistles4Edward chapter 11 . 12/11/2009
Love this chappie! I would like to read more.
| Babette12 chapter 11 . 12/11/2009
Oh, evil cliffie woman! I only have a few seconds, but I love what you did with this. I can really feel Edward's remorse.
| MovieMoments chapter 11 . 12/11/2009
Oh? Intersting approch...
I'm really rather glad that Edward didn't actually screw Tanya. Still disterbing that he even considered cheatingon Bella, but again I am terribly glad that he didn't actually do anything incredibly incriminating.
Thanks for updating 'Alabaster' and 'Volition'. They both really rock! (Particularly the later) I have a friend at school who I reccomended this fic to and shes been raving about it with me whenever I see her is history.
| Crispy Anakin chapter 11 . 12/11/2009
My interest is piqued. For a second I thought Bella had become sort of a tabloid fixation, but that doesn't seem plausible. Is he going to model his behaviour after Tiger Woods? jkjk.
| Babette12 chapter 10 . 12/11/2009
Aw, there's just something about a guy that takes care of you when you're sick, isn't there? And the toe socks? Yeah, that would make my hubs laugh as well.
On to Volition...
| LovesTwilightFanFics83 chapter 10 . 12/11/2009
| Sophia24 chapter 10 . 12/11/2009
aw, i thought that one was kinda sweet. :D
| Creampuf99 chapter 10 . 12/11/2009
This one shot was the perfect antidote to the last one, I love these little bits of stories.