|Reviews for Fictionista Wrkshp Dec 2009 Daily WitFit Prompts|
| Crispy Anakin chapter 11 . 12/11/2009
My interest is piqued. For a second I thought Bella had become sort of a tabloid fixation, but that doesn't seem plausible. Is he going to model his behaviour after Tiger Woods? jkjk.
| Babette12 chapter 10 . 12/11/2009
Aw, there's just something about a guy that takes care of you when you're sick, isn't there? And the toe socks? Yeah, that would make my hubs laugh as well.
On to Volition...
| LovesTwilightFanFics83 chapter 10 . 12/11/2009
| Sophia24 chapter 10 . 12/11/2009
aw, i thought that one was kinda sweet. :D
| Creampuf99 chapter 10 . 12/11/2009
This one shot was the perfect antidote to the last one, I love these little bits of stories.
| MovieMoments chapter 10 . 12/10/2009
| Sophia24 chapter 9 . 12/10/2009
aw...i actually had the urge to cry throughout that but i resisted because my mascara isnt waterproof! I love your writing and i can't wait for the next one. :D
Oh, I'm holding a contest, if you're interested...the link for its on my profile. Thanks. :)
| MovieMoments chapter 9 . 12/9/2009
You know I love this little thread, so thank you for adding another to it so soon!
Smiles and festive cheer,
| LovesTwilightFanFics83 chapter 9 . 12/9/2009
yay really liking this story...i know Edward is a big douche bag as messed up as it sounds it's a nice change of pace that the other fan fics i read. very original! can't wait for the next one!
| Babette12 chapter 9 . 12/9/2009
Okay, you hold him down and I'll slap him, or we could do it the other way. Either way, he deserves pain. And not just the kind that comes from realizing you've just screwed up big time and have probably destroyed the best thing in your life.
Anyway. You did such a wonderful job with her feelings. Exactly what I would expect. Just because you want to kill someone doesn't mean you don't love them any more. I fully understand her walking out on him, though. She needs to regroup. She is in the position now of deciding what comes next. Personally, I don't know if I could handle that particular violation of trust.
BTW - GMTA! I did a sunset too! Only, mine is a bit more, um, sensual. (shrugs) You know me!
| Sophia24 chapter 8 . 12/9/2009
aw, i loved that last one; Edward's the asshole and Mike's the nice guy. Its so refreshing! :D
| LovesTwilightFanFics83 chapter 8 . 12/8/2009
oh wow..a lil weird reading from Jessica's POV I wonder are you gonna continue this from B & E's POV i really would love to see that blossom into a full story...i hope you do...but very cute Mike & Jess
| MovieMoments chapter 8 . 12/8/2009
TWO chapters when I checked my inbox today!
So, the second is that linked piece to the whole 'E cheating on B' thing you mentioned?
Oh, I love Jessica in the second one. She is usually seen as some god awful witch, this time she is seen as well...for lack of another fitting term - respectable.
The first I am interested in. How long was it actually supposed to take to get from Ireland to America? And what time period was it from? Sorry, it was probably mentioned or obvious, but Im tired after a day of shopping. Who knew a school could actually take it textile students out for a day of shopping at catwalks? It was friggin awesome!
Thanks for the posts and see you soon!
Best of wishes,
| Crispy Anakin chapter 8 . 12/8/2009
I like how Jessica isn't a nitwit in this storyline. Kudos for continuing it.
| Babette12 chapter 8 . 12/8/2009
This was great! I can easily see this happening. And I'm the exact same way. When I've had a bad day, I always go for something funny. I simply have to laugh and it really does make everything better.
Now please, please, please tell me that things weren't what they looked like in that office! Please?