Reviews for Changed
narutosonlyfriend chapter 4 . 4/17/2011
wow sucks for charlie
principessa-della-mafia chapter 4 . 7/6/2010
Please update soon! Please? i love it so much im practically bouncing in my seat and my parents are looking at me funny.
principessa-della-mafia chapter 3 . 7/6/2010
Awww! poor Bella and not to mention Charlie/ please update soon this is a great story.
principessa-della-mafia chapter 1 . 7/6/2010
Cold much? i can't wait till bella is a vampire.
Forcystus5 chapter 4 . 6/13/2010
Hi you can call me Forcystus5! I am a fan of yours from Panama City. Listen, this email may look long but please read it all so that it makes sense to you. My favorite story that you have written is "Changed". And since you hadn't updated that story since last year I am guessing that you have a writer block. And since if you become happy you will update faster (well that is what you said on your author note, sort of) and I want your story to continue I will give you ideas. But this is your fanfiction and from no one else. You don't have to put my ideas is you don't want but you hadn't updated Changed since last year and your fans are waiting (myself included). These ideas are from private mail rather than review but anyway let me begin. You said that you want Bella in Denali right? Well to begin with I don't know if you have read breaking dawn but, if you did, you should know that Bella has a defensive power: That she can nullify vampiric mental power. So far you hadn't explain if the Bella in your fanfiction has that power as well but in your author notes you said yourself that this is your fanfiction and you can put it however you like. So here comes my idea so that the clan of Denali accepts Bella: You could put that, instead of her original power she could have a power that allow her to mimic the powers of other vampires. She could get the powers of Kate and Eleasar for a start. And since the power of eleasar makes him detect the powers of other vampires he must think that vampires with rare abilities are extremely invaluable. That and without mentioning that he was a servant of Aro. He could have influenced Eleasar thoughts about special vampires. Anyway, since Eleasar could value powerful vampires, he decided that Bella needs proper training in the vampire ways. She will need to have control of her thirst and also her new discover powers. And then he could send her over to the Vulturi so that she gains the powers of Jane, Alec, Demetri, Aro, and Renata to mention a few. If Aro value powerful vampires because he feel that they are good additions to their specie he would love to have Bella close to him and train her to become the strongest vampire of all time. Now even if you like these ideas now comes a time when you have to make a decision. You begin your story with the idea of making Bella think that Edward was just playing with her. So far I have notice that this fact affects her a lot. You could put that she decide to join the vulture and get as many powers as possible so that she can find Edward and make her revenge. Seriously, could you imagine the look in Edward's face when he discover that Bella now has LOADS of vampiric powers and that she acquired the with the sole purpose of track him down and get revenge? Could you imagine the other Cullen's look especially the ones of Jasper since he made armies of powerful vampires? He could have thought that if he had her on his side he could have won many battles. Then again, this is your fanfiction and but you have 72 reviews and even if some didn't like your story at least they read it and take their time to comment. Anyway update soon!

Hoping that my ideas make you happy and will aid you to update faster
Lenore chapter 2 . 5/22/2010
hey ur diclaimers r sooooo hilarious! btw u spelt really wrong u spelt rely not really bye but other than that ur story is going soooo AWESOME!
Naydra chapter 4 . 4/27/2010
Its too short! *cries*
Vicki219 chapter 4 . 4/19/2010
Oh no thats so sad, poor Charlie!
YouJustGotVamp'd chapter 4 . 4/3/2010
luv it but ready for denali's. Hey if you wouldn't mind would you read my story. It's called Isabella or...
B and E 4ever chapter 4 . 2/11/2010
i just came by your story looking for a different one but it really caught my eye. i really can't wait for the next update i am really liking this story. update soon
mIsS.iNdEpEnDeNt.1011 chapter 4 . 2/4/2010
"I was done being weak"

Loved that.

We are finaly going to see the Tough side of Bella!

YAY!

Exciting!

Update soon!

I am loving it!

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mIsS.iNdEpEnDeNt.1011 chapter 3 . 2/4/2010
WHAT!

OMG!

I thought it was SAM!

Omg I can't believe that!

I am so shocked!(NO JOKE!)

That is something I have never ever read before in a fancfiction!

O.O

BRILLIANCE!

Not jus saying that!

WRITE MORE SOON!

x
mIsS.iNdEpEnDeNt.1011 chapter 2 . 2/4/2010
O.o

Wow. That was so fraky. I screamed when Victoria bit her. my mom thought I was watching some horror movie or something.

Terrifyingly amazing!

Loved it!

NO joke.

X
mIsS.iNdEpEnDeNt.1011 chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
Love it!

Amazing. You got the characters just right.

I totally Freaked at the end when Bella heard Victoria!

Keep it up!

X
EMZ452 chapter 2 . 1/28/2010
Good story, interesting idea, but the word is 'really' not 'rely'. Good luck with the rest!
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