Reviews for My Mistake
Guest chapter 1 . 9/3/2013
I really like your story , but it is incomplete! I want to know what happen to them after they met! Please continue the story! You really did a job well done! I am done reading it, wishing you had finished the part 2 of the story! Please!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/3/2013
Where is the part 2 of this story?
Aly chapter 16 . 10/17/2012
I love your story, please write more. I'd really like that. Thanks
luv ta luv ya chapter 14 . 9/26/2012
Well since you asked nicely ...geez Freddie better get a move on before he gets caught
luv ta luv ya chapter 13 . 9/26/2012
Idk how children benefits but ok awww its so sweet how she helps him he just keeps finding more and more friends as always love your story
luv ta luv ya chapter 12 . 9/26/2012
Ok im unsure how to play along with this one but I'll still review there's not much to say except I hope he finds her quick the pain is getting stronger
luv ta luv ya chapter 11 . 9/26/2012
You know I was never one to follow instructions but I happen to like yours. I know this must be tough for her but Marissa is a basket case and will probably always be one
luv ta luv ya chapter 10 . 9/26/2012
Oh yes I will review you ! Lol its hilarious to play along. At first I didn't get what Freddie was saying about the we stuff but now I do and I have to say its incredible that he thinks like that and idk but it brings tears to my eyes I love this story
luv ta luv ya chapter 9 . 9/26/2012
Ok here's a big BOMB Im trying to remind myself this is a story and I can't attack the guy who took his wallet but that still dosent mean I don't want to :( dumb thieves
luv ta luv ya chapter 8 . 9/26/2012
Really I was looking forward to being paid oh well man I love Martha and Donny they're helping him in a big way. I just hope Freddie finds Sam soon and I hope she's happy to see him
luv ta luv ya chapter 7 . 9/26/2012
Awww he said he loves her. I try my hardest not to pick sides but stories like this I can't help it I'm definitely more of a seddie fan. Also its so cute when boys cry I mean not full boo hoo ugly face cry but I'm trying not to but can't help it straight face cry. Anyways as always love your story!
luv ta luv ya chapter 6 . 9/26/2012
I hope your not that kind of guy Lol and this story im not lying you have some real talent
luv ta luv ya chapter 5 . 9/26/2012
I forgot to mention Sam's mom is pathetic it really pisses me off. Ok and now the journey begins I just -i just hope they find a way to be together
luv ta luv ya chapter 4 . 9/26/2012
Come on Freddie go find her please stop the pain its freaking contagious and I hate feeling it ...but thats not gonna stop me from reading lol
luv ta luv ya chapter 3 . 9/26/2012
Every time im about to read a chapter im like nope nt gonna comment on it but you somehow found a way to change that. Your story is really getting to me and surprisingly I don't mind :)
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