Reviews for My Mistake
cybershaun99 chapter 24 . 7/15/2016
I kind of like the disjointedness of this chapter, it gives an extra mystery in working out the order in which things happened.

Overall, really good story.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/2/2015
Nice chapter, love it
purplelove27 chapter 1 . 8/1/2014
Also another story of yours I've read but have yet to review. All I have to say is that you sir, have a way with words.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/20/2014
Cute story, love it
Guest chapter 1 . 7/18/2014
Great story, love it
Guest chapter 1 . 7/8/2014
Nice story, I love it
Guest chapter 24 . 6/20/2014
Great story, love it
Blood fox chapter 24 . 6/2/2014
Fuck YOOOOOOU! For abandoning the story. It's like seeing the worlds greatest trailer only to find that the film is 5 seconds of static. So fuck you,and a good day to you.
dragonstag chapter 24 . 5/31/2014
Soon? It's been three years and you still haven't updated the story.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/3/2013
I really like your story , but it is incomplete! I want to know what happen to them after they met! Please continue the story! You really did a job well done! I am done reading it, wishing you had finished the part 2 of the story! Please!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/3/2013
Where is the part 2 of this story?
Aly chapter 16 . 10/17/2012
I love your story, please write more. I'd really like that. Thanks
luv ta luv ya chapter 14 . 9/26/2012
Well since you asked nicely ...geez Freddie better get a move on before he gets caught
luv ta luv ya chapter 13 . 9/26/2012
Idk how children benefits but ok awww its so sweet how she helps him he just keeps finding more and more friends as always love your story
luv ta luv ya chapter 12 . 9/26/2012
Ok im unsure how to play along with this one but I'll still review there's not much to say except I hope he finds her quick the pain is getting stronger
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