Reviews for Devastated
Arinia chapter 5 . 8/29/2011
You are going to continue this right? It has such a unique premise, and I'm eager to see more! Please update soon, it's got too much potential to just be left.
Lizella chapter 5 . 7/22/2011
well this is rather interesting and certainly different, I would like to see you continue
doodlerTM chapter 5 . 6/20/2010
I wish you'd write some more of this. It's pretty good and has lots of potential. Don't leave Dan hanging! :( I know that you're preoccupied with your current stories, but at least start thinking about this again, please!
Rob chapter 4 . 4/10/2010
/Rorschach leafed through the porn, giving Daniel a mumbled thank-you before slipping the magazines in his trench coat without a word. Who knew Rorschach liked porn?/

Um. If that's one of your "in-character" sexual references, I think you might have missed a vital part of Rorschach's character. You know, the whole "deeply scarred about anything to do with sex" part ;)
benagail24 chapter 3 . 1/15/2010
i like it i can't wait to
that stranger down there chapter 2 . 12/15/2009
hey nice story cant wait for the other chapters

keep up the good work
sepulchreangel chapter 1 . 12/3/2009
*squeaks in terror*

OHNODAN! D: I will be anxiously awaiting the next update!
query4 chapter 1 . 12/3/2009
It feels a little choppy, the action is going a little too fast to really feel anything and the characters seem to be glossing over events. The shooter's thoughts sounded more machiavellian than street thug.

Also, is this GN based or movie based? I'm guessing GN, since Dan wore spandex in the comic and armor in the movie.

Keep working on it.
John Hawkman chapter 1 . 12/3/2009
Pretty good. Can't wait to read the rest.