|Reviews for The end|
| The-Undead-Child chapter 3 . 7/20/2013
I am loving this story! I am hoping to read more!
| Keagan of Rohan chapter 3 . 1/28/2011
First off, the grammar and puctuation are weak. It ruins the flow of the story.
Secondly, you've turned Hinata into the dreaded Mary Sue. And something about this seems vaguely cliche, but a mildly interesting idea. I'm not sure exactly where this is going, and all the action/adventure seems to have been used up. Please tell me this isn't going to turn into one of those crappy AU high school fic.
Third, please, for the love of GOD, put all your little notes into an author's note at the beginning. Little notes injected into the story ruin the flow as well.
Huh. I have less complaints than I usually do. Congrats.
And a question: To this day, the appeal of SasuHina alluds me, other than the fact that some believe them to be 'cute'. What's so great about pairing two people that have probably never spoken to each other?
| mich12 chapter 3 . 5/7/2010
i love it
write more ;D
| field innocence chapter 3 . 2/1/2010
| field innocence chapter 2 . 1/17/2010
I like it, but the grammar is weak, other than that. I like the plot, it's cute _
| DJ chapter 1 . 12/4/2009
this story seem interesting. i can't wait to read more.
| Ms. RomanceFan chapter 1 . 12/3/2009
I like this story, i think i seen something like this on YouTube about sasuke and hinata.
Well, please update soon.