Reviews for Surprises
Guest chapter 3 . 11/14/2015
I loved the idea of Sanji and Zoro growing up to be best friends. It's too sweet :3

Everything was amazing, but I thought I'd just say that in this story you say (from Usopp's perspective, of course,) that Zoro was the oldest member of the crew before Robin and Franky joined. While he was older than the majority of the crew, Sanji actually has a few months on him - Sanji's birthday being in March, Zoro's being in November. Considering that November is after Sanji's birthday and both of them are 19 years old, Zoro is slightly younger. It's a weird thought, I know. XD

Loved it! Can't wait to read the last chapter and any others that have yet to come :)
SETOGIRL chapter 4 . 8/22/2015
I am in love with your writing style
Cant wait to see more
Wordlet chapter 4 . 5/25/2015
XD this whole fic is so sweet! But really, where's Luffy? Don't mark it complete yet! Keep going keep going, your going deep here!
Mystery Guest chapter 4 . 4/22/2015
Fabulous. As always. ;)

- Mystery Guest
Valdesa chapter 4 . 2/14/2015
Still enjoying your stories Just a thought: earlier, you said that Zoro was the oldest member of the crew before Franky joined. However, as far as I know, Sanji and Zoro are both nineteen at the start of the series, but Zoro's birthday is in November while Sanji's is in March; wouldn't that make Sanji older?

I don't usually review your stories because you ask for thoughtful reviews and I usually can't find anything useful to add. I hope this little nitpick is alright :)

Guest chapter 4 . 12/14/2014
Zoro being colorblind is now headcanon
BlatantBookworm chapter 4 . 10/24/2014
I like this idea, that Zoro's colourblind. It makes perfect sense to me. And I especially like the idea that the main reason it's completely driven home to him is Sanji's insults.

I have no idea if you're still writing this or not, but if you are, I can't wait to see what you come up with next, and if you're not, well I enjoyed reading it anyway.
BlatantBookworm chapter 3 . 10/24/2014
Perfect! Personally, I love Sanji and Zoro's complicated friendship, and I love how you fixed in Usopp and Franky's perspective on it.
BlatantBookworm chapter 2 . 10/24/2014
This is cute, and it makes sense. I can definitely see Usopp being wary to refuse food, even if it makes him sick.
Lautitiaspero chapter 1 . 10/1/2014
Are you going to write any more One Piece stories? Please do! I really like the way you describe their bonds and relationships with each other. The longer stories are the best. You have really awesome plots- they are interesting, yet easy to follow. And when they are long there are just more to like. So if you have time and find inspiration somewhere, I would love to read more of your One Piece stories.
Vampchick2010 chapter 4 . 9/14/2014
I love this fanfic. it is interesting and entertaining.
FlyingLemonKitteh chapter 4 . 6/13/2014
I love this
MajorlyMusical chapter 4 . 4/23/2014
These are adorable and I really love them! They all revolve around such simple things but they're things that matter and that makes them really important! Plus everyone on the crew is really in tune with each other, so I can definitely see things like this happening.

Your writing is fantastic, and I can't wait for more surprises!
Fi Suki Saki chapter 4 . 4/12/2014
Oohh... That's just horrible that Zoro is Semi-Colorblind...! Red-Green blind...!
Oh for god sake... Red practically is Luffy's color... And Green IS his own color...

That's just horrible to blind at those two important color...
Both color has meaning about Life y'know... The color of life... #shuddered


Usopp's chapter was Great! The way how he complaint and Franky listen to him was Nice!

And i kinda agree with him in some way too...


And Sanji's part was Great as well! About him talking to Usopp's food problem! yaay
Too bad it's about shellfish, not mushroom...
I never really find one, i think...

And about Nami's part was understable! Great!
Teegra123 chapter 4 . 2/3/2014
If I were to choose my favorite part...I can't. I love them all, they're all amazing! **
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