Reviews for Float
linalove chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
This a good start but it'll be easier for readers if you made smaller paragraphs...Just a suggestion.

I hope you update soon.

x Lina :)
honey chapter 1 . 1/30/2010
hmm not bad, a lil long paragraph there

but nice story idea
justsukiya chapter 1 . 1/18/2010
hey! promising beginning! can't wait for more!