Reviews for Pieces
Tia-Lewise chapter 1 . 2/10
Beautiful 3
TA Salmalin chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
I can completely see this being how Yuffie and Vincent get together, falling & fighting their way into a relationship without quite realizing how it happened. It's good for Vincent to feel vulnerable around people who won't take advantage of it...well, not in ways he won't enjoy, anyway
Juliedoo chapter 1 . 5/9/2012
I LOVED how you portrayed their relationship, so awkward and adorable and sweet. I think you did a good job with Vincent's inner dialogue, too. This was a great one shot. n_n
Lady Tal0n chapter 1 . 1/24/2012
I've never reviewed? How...disappointing of me.

I remember this FanFic clearly because one line always stood out to me. "You're not supposed to say 'I'm sorry' all emo-like..." It's probably the best Yuffie-line I've ever read. Smut isn't good if you focus all your energy on it and twist it into PWP. I'd much rather read a minimal-smut fic with a lot of meaning than a vulgar, explicit and totally meaningless sex scene. (That's just normally porn, people!) In short, this was a really well written one-shot.

Awesomely written.

A Broken Heroine
Moogle Princess chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
The "No Yuffie you're a towel" line made me laugh out loud. I enjoyed this very much.
valorkairi chapter 1 . 5/27/2011
"You're not supposed to say 'I'm sorry,' all emo-like, Vince. You're supposed to say 'No Yuffie, you're a towel,' and then we have really hot make-up sex." OMFG. That made me laugh so hard. xDD
Kuroya chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
I like the meaning! Smut is better with meaning in my book. p I love this! Hot, romantic VY sex is like food for my brain. Or something.

But you shouldn't apologize, that's silly! I am in love with this, and the Where We Collide stories. Plus, I need some happiness after reading your angst. :)
123rwefsdf3q4 chapter 1 . 1/1/2011
I definitely have to agree with the rest of the reviewers that you did a fantastic job. I really enjoyed reading the story through Vincent's point of view which a few authors do. I think that you accomplished something that a lot of people can't do and I really appreciated this story. Thanks a lot! :DDD

P.S. Sorry for the formal use of language.. I get really nerdy when I review a good fic xDDDD

alexzhou04
AxelXNamine chapter 1 . 11/21/2010
Great story
Spikers chapter 1 . 9/17/2010
i think you did incredibly well. i like it a lot. _
Sepsis chapter 1 . 6/18/2010
That was great!
Aha Haha chapter 1 . 4/6/2010
I loved it. :P Your snippets of dialogue were really funny, and you write Vincent's POV very well.

I'm pretty sure I noticed one of two grammatical errors, but they looked more like typos than anything. So, my only construct. crit. would be to read for typos a tad more.
dragonwingedangel chapter 1 . 3/27/2010
Awesome!

You had me worried through out the story cause everything was spoken in the past tense and I though that Yuffie had died!

But to my relief she lives!

At least I think!

But the angst/drama in that would have be also good!

Anyways amazing story!
Toph43 chapter 1 . 2/23/2010
well...that was steamy. very well written.
Mahon chapter 1 . 1/29/2010
IT'S OKAY SMUT IS AWESOME

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