|Reviews for Matt's Sinnoh Story|
| sunshine5991 chapter 6 . 2/14/2010
I really love this story, I hope my OC can come into it soon, please update soon
| Hotrod198 chapter 5 . 2/11/2010
Nice chapter. And u used my OC! Thanks! ANyway keep writing
| allora123 chapter 4 . 1/31/2010
when next chapter?
| Neo Hollow Ichigo chapter 4 . 1/26/2010
Nice story. Might as well submit my OC.
Appearance: Long sleeved red shirt (sort of like Silver’s from the manga), black fatigue pants, and red and black Nike’s, black fingerless gloves
Pichu(Male)Starter Pokemon(Evolves to Pikachu then to Raichu)
Piplup:(Female)Caught at Verity Lakefront(Evolves to Prinplup then to Empoleon)
Heracross:(Female)Found in a honey tree
Croagnuk:(Male)Found at Pastoria Marsh(Evolves to Toxicroak)
Mime Jr.(Male)Hatched from egg(Evolves to Mr. Mime)
Murkrow(Female)Caught in Eterna Forest(Evolves to Honchkrow)
If my OC is chosen then please PM me if any info is needed.
| A Half-Empty Glass chapter 3 . 1/24/2010
Dude, nice story! Saw Farla's review and have to say s/he gets old after a while. I saw your accepting OCs, if you still want 'em just send an OC form and I'll fill it out. Only if you want to though. The OCs pokemon will be stronger so if you don't like that, it's OK. Sorry for the OC thing being longer than the actual review...
| Hotrod198 chapter 1 . 1/8/2010
Nice story. Here is my OC
Appearance: Grey shirt with black jacket. Wears jeans and a black cap. Blue eyes and spiky brown hair. He has a slight tan.
Chimchar(Male) Cole's first Pokemon. (Evolves to MOnferno and then Infernape)
Gible (Male) Cole's first captured Pokemon. (Evolves to Gabite then Garchomp)
Squirtle (Male) Hatches from egg. (Evolves to Wartortle and then to Blastoise)
Sneasel (Male) On team when met. (Evolves to Weavile)
Raichu (Male) Saves from falling off a cliff
Skitty (Female) Uses it when battling hard trainers with strong male pokemon by using Attract. (Evolves to Delcatty)
Badges: Oreburgh Gym (Obtains rest throughout story)
Role:Main Character or Rival
Hometown: Snowpoint City
Dad: Earth Gym Leader in Kanto
Mum: Grand Festival Winner
Brother: Travelling Johto region.
That's all i got. If you need any more info just PM me.
| sunshine5991 chapter 2 . 1/8/2010
So far it seems really good, there were no major mistakes that I noticed. I hope you are able to fit my OC in somewhere, but I don't mind if you cant
please try and update soon
| Farla chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
You wouldn't capitalize animal or mouse, so you shouldn't capitalize words like pokemon or pikachu. The only time you should capitalize it is if you're using it as the pokemon's name, ie, Ash's pikachu is called Pikachu. Similar reasoning should be applied to terms like trainer, types like electric and items like pokeballs.
Starting with a character waking up in the morning is horribly overdone, and honestly it was boring all by itself.
No, if everyone else goes out at ten then your parent wouldn't randomly think it was a bad idea, and saying they don't care what everyone else thinks is bull. It's like parents deciding that six is too young for kindergarten. Just start at ten, there's no need to spend all this time trying to make excuses for eleven.
| sunshine5991 chapter 1 . 12/4/2009
hey, I really really really like this so far and I was hoping that maybe you would accept OC's, so I'm gonna sent one in even though you probably wont use her, but anyway here, feel free to change any of the points, but if the name is changed let me know
Name: Jasmine Daniels
Appearance: she is very pretty although she does not really think about it, she has long brown hair which is wavy and normally down, she is average height, has chocolate brown eyes and is thin
Normal Attire: she normally wears a pair of blue skinny jeans, a grey hoodie, white runners, she has a silver chain around her neck for her starters pokeball
Personality: she is quite a tomboy, she is very kind and easy to get along with, she likes to have a laugh, she has respect for other trainer, except if they treat pokemon badly, in that case she will try and get it through to them that they are wrong. If someone really gets on her nerves or says something bad about her past she will take off into the forest or on her own, no matter what the weather is like. To her, her pokemon are her family and they are the most important thing to her, she even puts them before herself
Final Pokemon Team: she has had these pokemon for a while, they are very well trained and she does not want to catch anymore as she doesn’t want to send these one away
Delcatty (Was her starter as skitty) – female – note: knows tm’s like thunder and such
Dewgong – male
Rapidash – male
Espeon – female
Miltank – female
Altaria - female
History: when she was young her mother died in a car crash, her dad resorted to alcohol, she had no siblings to help her, she was left to clear up the damage her dad caused to her house, if she told him to stop drinking he would take his anger out on her, when she was 10 she took off on her journey without telling him and has never entered that house again
She doesn’t tell anyone about her parents, sometimes they notice her change in attitude when they ask about them, she has never told anyone no matter how much they ask, she will only tell if she is extremely close to that person and completely trusts them
Family: she doesn’t have any brothers or sisters and does not consider her parents as family
Love Interest?: yes (If possible)
If 'yes' What would they look for in their 'love interest'?: someone who treats her and pokemon right, who likes to have a laugh, and preferably is attractive
Please consider her and please send an email even if you say you are not using her, I won’t be offended especially since you weren’t asking for OC’s, it’s just better than waiting for something that isn’t gonna happen
| Rena The Insane chapter 1 . 12/4/2009
wow. i can't wait for more!