|Reviews for The Underground Railroad|
| Tervuren chapter 1 . 10/5/2010
Good story, but there was no real railroad in the Underground Railroad. It was just a system of safe houses that would hide slaves on their journey to freedom. Between all the houses was wilderness that slaves had to trek through, while avoiding slave catchers. Still, your story was well written & interesting.
| Napthal Contessa 45 chapter 1 . 12/4/2009
I think this is a really good story-you have their characters down really well, it would help though if you split it into the chapters i think.
the only really glaring thing is that there wasn't a literal railroad underground... you might want to do a bit of research.
other than that though, good story.