|Reviews for Distorted View|
| Mistiness chapter 1 . 5/11/2010
A really interesting concept are you gonna write any sequels or anything?
| KrisEleven chapter 1 . 12/7/2009
This is a really interesting idea. I like the way the title describes what is coming- it was a good choice there.
Good structure, overall. Make sure you reread the document before you post it to catch mistakes. There is a word with 'i/' '/i' around it instead of actual italization, which you should be able to do.
Also, consider getting a beta to catch awkward sentences and punctuation errors, but I did really enjoy this original idea. Good job.