|Reviews for All Things Pass|
| RafaelaAngelusLapsus chapter 3 . 12/23/2009
Good story! Cant wait to read more!
| Haissan chapter 3 . 12/17/2009
so, this is were it becomes interesting
| Master of the Boot chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
At this point, I don't know what to expect. It could be good or it could be the exact opposite of everything that I enjoy. I'll be honest with you, but If I feel the rage building up; I'll swiftly withdraw and take a few deep breaths.
Characterization wasn't bad. They seemed to be themselves. Bella seemed a tad quakey. That would have been more realistic when she was human. She'd still be a worrier but I don't think she'd be so shakey as a vampire.
So, the jury is still very much out at this point.
I've got to get back to my studies. I'll see you later.
Master of the Boot
| To love and be loved Esme chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
gah what happens next! xx
| geophf chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
Good teaser trailer.
Two stories out in less that two days (this and "Let it Snow"). Fun for you? I hope so. The tone of both pieces shows the authors enjoying their work, and that makes it all the more a pleasure to read.
Hm. But, who was it that thought up the idea of Rosalie being all righteous and commanding, taking charge and the lead? That seems so unlike what I've seen of her in (most) fan-fiction. I mean, isn't Rosalie like this show-stopper? I mean, she just spouts out this mean stuff that slows everybody else down (and turns out to be exactly right at the end)? You know, that really annoying person you never listen to and who gets all annoyed about it?
Like in this piece. But her, taking charge? Leading the way?
(*very, very private smile*)
Poor Alice, seeing so many visions, not knowing which ones are trivial and which ones are vital. If she tells everybody everything she sees, she becomes this annoying oracle, (*ahem* Rosalie), but if she leaves something out, like checking Bella's hamper, she misses a Riley. I think of a the twichars, it must be the hardest for Alice to be Alice. How can she keep a smile on her face when she gets all these "Minority Reports"?
Okay, I'm calling it, however. How are you going to have all the children of the Cullen family star in this fic and not slight some (or all) and not overemphasize some (or all) with the "it's my turn to speak" kind of fanfic that so inundates this site?
If it was just an Edward and Alice fic, okay. If it was just an Alice and Jasper fic, okay. Or just one, or just another "pairing." But all the Cullen kids? Dunno. That seems like a tall order to fill.
But I'm glad to see you having so much fun: writing fan fiction. So many ideas, so much collaborative work!
| nustressmom chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
Yay a new story! You have me intrigued...can't wait for more!
| Mari Rosier chapter 1 . 12/4/2009
What? What is true? D:
Now I'm anxious .-.