Reviews for The Boy Behind the Bars
KrisEleven chapter 1 . 12/13/2010
I like! Nice to see Ben from someone else's point of view; I thought you captured the character of him really well with this cop looking at him through the bars.

A structural note: You're means 'you are'. Read over all of your sentences before you post and if you come across a you're, read the sentence as if it said 'you are'. You use it a lot when it should be a possessive 'your', and that will catch that mistake.

Rowana1 chapter 1 . 3/12/2010

Have a Ned plushie! ?
Cupcake chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
AWSOME STORY! i really liked it!

i think you should write it from Ben's point of veiw! that would rock! you dont have to but i think it would be cool and i would SO read it!

once again good story!

~where the wind blows
ghostgal4 chapter 1 . 12/15/2009
That was rely good!
where the wind blows chapter 1 . 12/4/2009
Good Story! i really like it...

Ben in the best...

Can't wait for you to update or write somthing new!

~where the wind blows!
ForbiddenFruit107 chapter 1 . 12/4/2009
I absolutley loved that. It was really really good. REALLY good.!