Reviews for Trying
carleesimotherofcats chapter 1 . 2/19/2012
it was pretty damn emotional haha! loved it:)
Twilighternproud chapter 1 . 2/9/2012
Winged Peach chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
Cute and sweet. A perfect romantic story.
me chapter 1 . 12/24/2009
loved it, felt i wrapped up kinda quick, but loved the realness. if hg and dm got together, this is how it would go down, no occ draco, no occ hermoine, just 2 ppl trying to make it happen. she tells him and doesn't abort it, griffy courage all the way. no magically happily ever after, just 2 ppl trying ... to make it work
Moonlit-Mistress chapter 1 . 12/9/2009
wow. this is good. the very end was great i loved it
Scarlytt chapter 1 . 12/9/2009
I really, really liked it. Great job writing Draco's POV, I thought.
Xanie chapter 1 . 12/6/2009
Draco Malfoy be a bad father? Rubbish, I say. Not with Hermione around to guide him, which is how it was really supposed to end up in the books. Hmph.

Anyway. This had so much fluff without the sap in it, and I commend you for that. We don't really need to write make-out scenes and cheesy lines just for it to be satisfyingly heartwarming, yeah? This has the perfect amount of fluff, and there wasn't even a single kiss involved!

Now THAT's what I call talent.
momo chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
this was so amazing. u should make a sequel. amazing story
Jessy Black chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
I just loved this Story,could you PLEASE consider writing 1 or 2 additional chapters.
starrlightt chapter 1 . 12/4/2009
i loved it :)

no probs that it's not beta-read!
memyselfiam chapter 1 . 12/4/2009
please continue this story...