Reviews for JUSAT AN EXTENT OF YTGC
rockynia chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
no thanks. I don't care about my grammar. I say me and you are the only people that ever read the book
TamaranEmpress chapter 1 . 12/9/2009
This is a good story but it feels rushed, like you were hurrying to get to the ending. All of your stories read very much like poems. If you want, I can become your beta-reader. You can send me your story and I can edit it for you. Feel free to send me a pm. :-)
Syrah-Celeste chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
Wow, that was so good! I kept thinking it was going to be Otis and Sarah's daughter. Love the twist at the end, it's so surprising and shocking