|Reviews for Of War's End and Fruit Tarts|
| gloomy maiko lover chapter 8 . 1/17/2010
I liked this you did a great,awsome job. so can't wait to know what happens next and can't wait till you update hope you update soon and luved the ending with Toph finding out about the baby haha so I'll be R&R as soon as I can xD xD
| gloomy maiko lover chapter 7 . 1/17/2010
haha I liked this and kind of loved this and it was funny when Mai said to Katara what did you think I was doing whispering sweet nothings in his ear and then Mai said something like to tell you I like my men with hair haha that was funny so you did a great,awsome,wonderful job as always and always will do so I'll be R&R xD xD
| gloomy maiko lover chapter 6 . 1/4/2010
liked this and kind of loved this xD you did a great,awsome,wonderful job as always and always will do so can't wait to know what happens next and can't wait till you update hope you update soon and I'll be R&R as soon as I can oh,and love the Maikoness the little that there was xD and again great job. xD
| Omoni chapter 6 . 12/30/2009
In regards to the last three reviews, I have to address them. I just wanted to know what you were thinking when you clicked on this collection, as I stated pretty firmly that this was a Maiko collection. I'm somewhat confused as to why this is so perplexing for you, or why you felt the need to continue reading it once you found out it was a Maiko collection.
Granted, I don't mind if you didn't like them for their content - that's fine. But not liking them because it has a pairing you don't like, when I warned you about it, and you went on to continue reading it anyways...that just doesn't make any sense for me. Sorry.
Um, thanks for reading?
| enchantress chapter 3 . 12/30/2009
Okay, so Zuko gets poisoned, WTH is up with AL of this MAIKO!
I understand that you like the ship but EVERY ONE ELSE IS THERE!
And Mai doesn't care about being rude, normally. Whether it means Zuko, or no Zuko involved.
And whats up with Duke and Toph? He's Eleven now, and shes like...fifteen!
A little weird. I'm still confused by the way.
Didn't like this chapter at AL.
| enchantress chapter 2 . 12/30/2009
WTH? Whats wrong with mai I can't understand!
Too much going on at once!
| Victor Velazquez chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
ZOMIGOD! This chapter is super long! Make them shorter okay?
I usually hate Maiko, but its a wonder that I can stand this.
Although Mai is a bit OOC, she sounds more like Katara...
And I couldn't concentrate on the story because it was boring.
But it wasn't that bad over all.
| Kimjuni2 chapter 6 . 12/30/2009
Ahh i love it Very great job again!
| The Lifeless girl chapter 5 . 12/20/2009
CUTE! i like it!
| maiko122 chapter 4 . 12/18/2009
Another good chapter. Suki is awesome
| maiko122 chapter 3 . 12/18/2009
Damn it hungry ass Zuko! Could've gotten himself killed!
| maiko122 chapter 2 . 12/18/2009
I don't have the words to accurately express my delight. I was scared for Mai but I knew she would make it since I read ch 5 first! Great job. Me thinks I will be fave-ing now :)
| maiko122 chapter 1 . 12/18/2009
Loved Mai's personality in this. She is my favorite character by far. I thought I had read these chapters but I guess I hadn't.
| maiko122 chapter 5 . 12/18/2009
Mai and Zuko with a smart-mouthed, feisty kid...I love it! Loved her name too. Very pretty. Thank you for not naming her Ursa. You have no idea how much that irritates me! If they should have a son down the line don't name him Iroh or Lu Ten!
| gloomy maiko lover chapter 1 . 12/14/2009
this was alright I didn't like the way Zuko treated Mai he didn't want to say were he was going to her so you did a good job. xD