Reviews for The Boy on the Cloud
Guest chapter 1 . 4/19
You don't get a lot of prizes for this don't you?
Guest chapter 1 . 4/4
That was amazing and so sad and i really wanna see percy freeing the gods and restoring the civilization
JacksonKane chapter 1 . 12/26/2014
DUDE, IF YOU DON'T FINISH THIS I SWEAR I'M GONNA KILL YOU OR KILL MYSELF.
THIS IS NOT THE END FOR A ONE-SHOT
I WANT, I DEMAND ANOTHER PART, I DEMAND AN END
PS:of course, just if you want to:D
Rhea chapter 1 . 11/28/2014
A masterpiece.
Marchini chapter 1 . 10/27/2014
Luke raped him... *Q* (well... you could say rape but Percy want it too, I KNOW IT (?))
Guest chapter 1 . 2/28/2014
Awesome Story! Keep it up!
moonshroom420 chapter 1 . 12/25/2013
okay u seriously need to continue
DarkShadowOwl chapter 1 . 8/26/2013
Holy crap this was amazing! Write more? Please?
Sol's Darkness chapter 1 . 7/29/2013
You could Definately make a sequel to this. I'm following, just in case.
turtle-moments chapter 1 . 4/29/2013
Break my heart with saddness and hope. Percy oh god this and Luke and total heart breaking sadness.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
This story is amazing! I must really applaud you for your skills!
omega2199 chapter 1 . 3/10/2013
This is really really good! I really enjoyed reading it, and I like that you ended it at the right point of time, and in the right way. Keep on writing!
heartfashion15 chapter 1 . 12/22/2012
You should write more. I don't know what but maybe about how he goes to save the gods and how they rebuild the world again, but with no pollution and maybe add a twist like after they the gods are free and Kronos and the other titans are gone they could bring back all of the heros who died that Percy was friends with. Just an idea you have to do anything.
randomperson chapter 1 . 10/12/2012
really awesome story
happy-go-lucky writer chapter 1 . 10/3/2012
I love the ending. It's such a cool plot and I liked how you paced it.
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