Reviews for What Started in an Alleyway
1cece chapter 1 . 3/20/2014
I enjoyed your story however it felt rushed to me.
crazycats7 chapter 1 . 2/25/2014
it was cute
twilightnaley19 chapter 1 . 12/25/2013
This was an awesome one shot. I enjoyed reading this.
sandy chapter 1 . 6/18/2013
This has so much potential & could be a really awesome, multi-chapter story; but it isn't. This is more a summary of a really great story. There's so little dialogue, major aspects aren't explained (like why is Edward an assassin, beyond the whole family thing; who does he work for, how is Bella suddenly involved & their entire relationship is just glossed over...) there's so much left undone. This could be one of the fics commented on in the thousands if it was completed.
PreciousAPerez chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
I want to read more of it PLEASE !
Godschildtweety chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
Real good
lsis chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
That was really a sweet little story, I loved it! And I think it was pretty hot and sexy Edward being a hitman.
Dreamer-Dark Angel chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
I love your stories :))) 3
84gemstone chapter 1 . 1/19/2011
Wow that was different but I really like it...poor Rose can't have kids I think I'm going to look for a story where she is the mummy for once...Edward as a hit man is kind if hot (yes I need my head tested) lol
KeeWit chapter 1 . 11/20/2010
Great story!
sky chapter 1 . 11/5/2010
grate story
Peace.Lovee.Edward chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
THIS WAS AMAZING!

i totally loved it!

it was incredible!
Angel chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
Great Story :D
MagdulkaCullen chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
I really like this story-you had a great idea...
stories1 chapter 1 . 3/13/2010
Oh I'm so glad I stumbled across this story! I loved it! Very fresh and different, and very written. Even though it's a one-shot, I felt like I travelled the whole year with them :)
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