|Reviews for Learning to Love|
| Belthasar chapter 4 . 9/19/2011
| AnegOtaku chapter 4 . 1/3/2010
Awesome story! 3
I never even considered this pairing before,
but i'd have to say you made it work well
I read the ending notes, those sound like some interesting pairings, though i'd probably only be able to write the HarunaxAsakura one... xD
Anyway, i'm definately gonna have to start writing fanfics again. (I used to on an old account for another anime but my inspiration died pretty quickly.)
I'm trying out a HarunaxChisame, because i don't know why but i love that pairing xD
| Sony Ninja chapter 4 . 12/19/2009
what an awesome finish I'm so happy you did this story and I can't wait for the lemon either but that's never anything new right. Also I'm glad you liked my deranged pairing ideas and I hope to see a few of them in the up coming future, once again awesome story I look forward to the lemon so till then see
| notsalmanrushdie chapter 3 . 12/15/2009
A beautiful pairing you've constructed exceedingly well. The underlined dialogue is a little bit hard to read; a simple quote would be my suggestion.
Keep up the good work.
| xxWfCPxx chapter 3 . 12/13/2009
WOW :D she confessed
Very good - I liked how Ako didn't immediately say yes like a lot of writers would have written it and that she was so shocked (as you would be in that situation) that she felt like she had to think it over - you wrote this bit very well; I also felt some joy when she was spinning in her room with the pillow!
I hope Nodoka is put out of her misery (worry-wise) soon though!
| Sony Ninja chapter 3 . 12/12/2009
FLUFFY,XD I always love when you update I can always expect an awesome update. Anyway here's my slightly knew deranged pairing list note I have no idea what's running through my mind when I make these so here we go
Yue x Makie (we've already gone to far with Nodoka and Ako so why not plus they're like complete opposites so I think it's cute)
Sakurako x Ku Fei (yes it's random really I just really want to see Sakurako paired up with someone, for one thing I can honestly say she never gets the spot light on her own and I want that to change)
Haruna x Asakura
Natsumi x Chisame (again I have no idea whats wrong with me XD)
Chachamaru x Sayo (I went there I totally went there LMAO)
Chao and Konoka (okay now you can call me crazy LOL)
again I don't know what possessed me to come up with these but just thought I'd share my madness with you if you want to do any of these then I SALUTE YOU, anyway cute chapter and I look forward to the next chapter so till next time see
| xxWfCPxx chapter 2 . 12/9/2009
:) I really liked this chapter and the new layout. I didn't understand the dr livingstone bit but that's probably just because I'm not very well read! I'm looking forward to Nodoka's determination/confession!
| Sony Ninja chapter 2 . 12/9/2009
Yo, awesome stuff, the more I read this the more I realize just how much Nodoka and Ako have in common, A lol on everything I really enjoy this, oh and now I have umpteen more cute or odd and cute negima pairings in my head, if you want to hear them PM me or I might just tell them to you next time *grins* so keep up th fantastic work and I'll review net time as well, so till then see
| KainUltima chapter 1 . 12/8/2009
Okay, first off I'd like to say great work on this. NodokaxAko has never been done and it makes for a refreshing read.
However, I did notice a few small things.
1. You spelled Haruna's name Haruka.
2. Ako not afraid of blood? Interesting twist since the manga says she's scared of it.
3. “Well that can wait until later…I have some more stuff I need to sort through before I get dinner and turn in. I’m guessing -san needs to head back too?
If I didn't know it was Nodoka talking I'd be confused at that part. You didn't give a name after -san.
Finally, too much bold. It's nice for making their sentences stand out, but it hurts the eyes after some time.
But all in all, great story. Can't wait for the next chapter.
| xxWfCPxx chapter 1 . 12/6/2009
:D Very good - I think these two are very cute together!
It might be useful though to distinguish between actual thoughts and first-person description; perhaps put thoughts in Italics?
Looking forward to the next chapter and exploring the library!
| Sony Ninja chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
You wanted to know if this met my expectations, let me just say, this met them and so much more, thank you so much for doing this story everything was A in my book, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter so please update soon, so till then see ya