|Reviews for Incentives|
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/1
big black cocks in this wat the fuck man is this some kinda porn.
| BatShitCrazy21 chapter 1 . 10/11/2014
It was very cute and sweet:)
| cassieanimorph01 chapter 1 . 5/25/2014
LOL! How much sugar have you guys had? XD
| Scarlet Spider-Ham chapter 1 . 5/11/2013
bat kids and sugar never a good combination
| SmallInsect chapter 1 . 12/24/2005
Funny _ Nice story you've got here. We've all learned a lesson from this, folks. RobinCasscookiesbad idea. See, if they'd used that method when I was learning to read, I would probably have figured it out when eveyrone else my age did :P).
I'm slightly sceptical of the situation, but hey, this is fanfic, so a minor exaggeration of possible canon is acceptable, and you were IC with pretty much everyone (even Nightwing, who you only gave a small part - people often overlook ICnessin small parts) so I guess thats okay. Plus, this was very fun to read
One of the main things I like about this is that you did not make the fatal flaw of portraying cass as dense. I've noticed it happen frequently. I mean, the girl's had experienced a very distinct form or learning all her life and while this makes reading and writing difficult, she's not an idiot. Finally someone's got it right.
You could probably try using a different way of portraying *thoughts* and **emphasis on words**. I'd advise using itallics to show thoughts and keep using the stars to display emphasis. Grammar, otherwise was very good and nothing leapt out at me.
| Hiril Moon chapter 1 . 10/10/2003
Ah... Gotta love the sugar rush...
| blakdove chapter 1 . 3/27/2002
| Amethyst M chapter 1 . 2/6/2002
| carlyd chapter 1 . 1/22/2002
aawwwww! That was great! I loved it! And i definately think that you should write more of these! Alright?
| Darklady chapter 1 . 1/20/2002
And -actually - a very *clever* idea that probably would work. I wish DC would get half so creative.
| Mouse Pirate chapter 1 . 1/19/2002
oh that was so good! keep writing!
| Ghost in the Machine chapter 1 . 1/19/2002
Not a bad little short piece.