Reviews for The Race to Hell
Guest chapter 35 . 10/16/2013
Great story so far! I love the twin situation so far- the cool/ not cool part. Amber and Ruby (ruby).
Guest chapter 53 . 4/12/2013
Has it finished? Because I really enjoyed it, amazing story! x
CBurns1995 chapter 53 . 2/20/2013
i really enjoyed reading this fanfic, you are a really good writer and you managed to capture everyones feelings really well :D
Mochi Schnauzer chapter 53 . 12/12/2012
Charlie dies! SO SAD! I actually wish that I could find a normal story about the chaotic lives of the Bakers somewhere on the internet that doesn't include anger or sadness in it! I just want them to act like family, not like a falling-apart family or a very -well-behaved family but like a normal family. Like the one they are on the TV, in the 1st movie before they're all teenagers and before all thing falling out happens and before Sarah grows out of being a tomboy.
Kitten008 chapter 53 . 6/22/2012
My black prince, I love your story, it's one of about 8 'sad' stories I have read witch actually make you feel some empathy for the characters. However HOW DARE YOU KILL CHARLIE! Sorry but I love Charlie. Let the writing take you anywhere!
Emmavics chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
Even though you wrote this ages ago I still want to say how good this is! Been reading this for a few weeks and still not bored!
Islanda chapter 51 . 9/2/2011
Don't worry, I haven't given up no this story at all, and I don't think anyone has! Keep going with the updates, because this story is still going strong! Great work, and keep writing! :)
strawberry-sunset194 chapter 51 . 8/11/2011
Nice chapter, I love that Jake really does seem like a patient. Not completely cured, you know?

You said if we had any wedding ideas to tell you...I think it'd be a real twist if William/Lorraine decided they didn't want to get married and while everyone was worried about that Sarah and Bobby/Joe get married :)

I highly doubt you use this but just some ideas for you, great story still! )
Angelomi chapter 51 . 8/10/2011
Hey!

I really love you story

I hope for a update very, very soon

Ps... Poor Jake, He's my fav!

Bye

Ps2... English isn't my native language to... forgive my bad grammar :P
Jazz248 chapter 51 . 8/10/2011
just to let you know that i still read this story! thanks so much for continuig for so long, i've really enjoyed this story :) i've been in hostels, on holiday for a couple of months and havent had time to review anything properly. i lile that you still manage to have one main story yet still focus on the whole family. i appreciate the time it must take you to write these stories, and i think they're good. and most of the time so is your english for a non native speaker :D thanks and good luck with your other stories xxx
Islanda chapter 50 . 6/29/2011
It's sad that the story is ending soon, but I get where you're coming from! It would definitely be hard to write in a different language, and it's amazing that you're doing it! Great work, as usual! :)
strawberry-sunset194 chapter 49 . 6/14/2011
Ooh! I can't wait until the wedding!

Plus everyone's reactions to the weddingfuneral...Good luck :)
THEcheeseluver12 chapter 49 . 6/13/2011
yay! you updated! :D awww i hope the Bakers will be okay :( another great chapter of a great story :)
Islanda chapter 49 . 6/13/2011
Awww! This chapter was so sweet and it made me smile! Everyone seemed so peaceful! Great job! :D
dolphinsstarmidfield23 chapter 48 . 5/23/2011
That was so sad I'm glad jake's home and I like how he seems more in control keep updating
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