Reviews for Temptations Of A Teenage Timelord
talie.coyne chapter 5 . 11/11/2013
Please post more, totally individual story, its inspiring.
Venturian Girl chapter 5 . 10/28/2013
My gosh, please write more! I love it it's amazing! O_O
Venturian Girl chapter 1 . 10/28/2013
I love this story so far! I can't wait to read moren :-)
Sakurai Haruka chapter 5 . 1/27/2010
is the teen doctor ever going to meet 904 yr old doctor? :D

CriminalsAndSnipers chapter 5 . 12/24/2009
Aww I feel really sorry for John now :( It made me cry a tiny bit :'( Anyway i love this story so keep writing damnit !
Cougerstar chapter 5 . 12/23/2009
Great chapter, though it felt a little rushed. The last paragraph was very good, showing this Doctor's feelings, as well as how he fits into Torchwood. You should also watch capitalization in the quotations, but overall, great story, just needs a little editing. I hope you don't mind constructive criticism.
The Author of DOOM chapter 4 . 12/23/2009
hehe! lol! Parents Evening! I cannot wait to see that. Excellent Story! I'm loving it more and more. :D FelizNavidad
Cougerstar chapter 4 . 12/13/2009
This is a great, original and well written story. I love the idea of a younger Doctor in Torchwood and look forward to seeing what will happen next. Please don't let this story die! That happens with to many other good stories.
CriminalsAndSnipers chapter 4 . 12/12/2009
Ha xD This is so awesome :D Please update soon !
Shayne Pratt chapter 4 . 12/11/2009
Haha! Oh poor Jack having to go to parent-teacher meetings! This is brilient!
CriminalsAndSnipers chapter 2 . 12/7/2009
Now this is good, please update soon :D
Shayne Pratt chapter 2 . 12/6/2009
My gosh, you need to continue this! It's a wonderful, brillaint idea! I love the idea of using the name "John Smith" as well. Keep up the great work!