Reviews for Vertigo
B chapter 1 . 2/12/2016
This is so utterly gorgeous, just wow. I'm in awe at how beautiful this is.

Thank you so much for writing and sharing!
amr56 chapter 1 . 8/30/2015
This is very well-written. Your description of Naruto is haunting and his relationship with Itachi is intriguing. Thanks!
AlmostElectric chapter 1 . 6/25/2014
Holy shit. You perfect bastard.
Yoru-no-Ookami chapter 1 . 6/20/2014
Wow. You are truly an amazing writer. I really enjoyed that. And thanks for teaching me so many beautiful big words :)
BloodColoredRose chapter 1 . 4/23/2011
great story! i luv the detail and the thought u put into it. keep up the great work!
otter cook chapter 1 . 2/9/2011
I read this story years ago (back when you first posted it) and even though a lot of the fic I read back then didn't stand the test of time and more mature eyes, this one most certainly did. It's one of the most utterly gorgeous fics that I've read, so still and small - and yet epic at the same time. Every sentence has such beauty and meaning in it, and reading it is a true experience: it drags the reader into the scene, painting it so vividly that even though we only catch a glimpse of a room, it's easy to imagine that there's a whole world beyond its walls. The same goes for the characters, in how deftly you've written Itachi and Naruto to be self-contained in the moment and yet completely defined by their past experiences.

This story is so soft and quiet in its brilliance, I can't help but love it. Thank you so much for reposting it! It was an absolute joy to reread it.
Hesunohana chapter 1 . 1/29/2011
really great ! I love it. some poesy inside and violence in the words too.

bravo !
BloodLoveAndPainForever chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
i like, you know this story(where their have window sex) reminds me of that Vampire movie, Underworld, on the cliff they were having sex. chapter 1 . 10/14/2010
I must say that this is an amazing and powerful fic. Your style made for an interesting read and I absolutely loved that final sentence! Awesome job!
SaceSage chapter 1 . 6/17/2010
You're the first person to make me like yaoi, written brilliantly and with a flourish I can't help but love.
Yaoi te nani XD chapter 1 . 5/13/2010
Wow. I'm not usually a ItaNaru fan, but I really loved this fic :)
Crazy PurpleSage chapter 1 . 4/14/2010


I love the surreal nature of it all. Descrbing Naruto as an elfinmale, daemon, impish, and then his idea of the marriage between death and laughter.

Brilliant. I also lke how you juxtapose this to Itachi's "fear" of heights.

Very well done. I enjoy reading your writing style immensely. Please continue writing. :)
bobalinabokonon chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
So this is weird: I read this and was all WHOA and then I gave my brain a second to catch up and went through looking for the action, what the story would look like with no sound or narration. It was...weird. And awesome. And I feel strongly that this is better than Swedish Fish, and like NOTHING is better than Swedish Fish. It is silly but true. And Naruto the Sunflower seems anti-Naruto, but it's a more accessible/vulnerable Naruto and it works with Iruka, I guess. Right. I mean, it seems an orphan that most of a town hates would have considered suicide, especially one that laughs at death(?). Yeah, never mind. Really, really good!
Imperial Mint chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
I don't really know what to say... it's utterly beautiful! I noticed this story a while ago but I've never really had time to read it properly. Thank you for deciding to post it up. I still don't think I could sing you enough praises!
sillypanda chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
Great story as usual, and I love love loved the ending.
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