|Reviews for Vertigo|
| BloodColoredRose chapter 1 . 4/23/2011
great story! i luv the detail and the thought u put into it. keep up the great work!
| otter cook chapter 1 . 2/9/2011
I read this story years ago (back when you first posted it) and even though a lot of the fic I read back then didn't stand the test of time and more mature eyes, this one most certainly did. It's one of the most utterly gorgeous fics that I've read, so still and small - and yet epic at the same time. Every sentence has such beauty and meaning in it, and reading it is a true experience: it drags the reader into the scene, painting it so vividly that even though we only catch a glimpse of a room, it's easy to imagine that there's a whole world beyond its walls. The same goes for the characters, in how deftly you've written Itachi and Naruto to be self-contained in the moment and yet completely defined by their past experiences.
This story is so soft and quiet in its brilliance, I can't help but love it. Thank you so much for reposting it! It was an absolute joy to reread it.
| Hesunohana chapter 1 . 1/29/2011
really great ! I love it. some poesy inside and violence in the words too.
| BloodLoveAndPainForever chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
i like, you know this story(where their have window sex) reminds me of that Vampire movie, Underworld, on the cliff they were having sex.
| bbreeziesyahoo.com chapter 1 . 10/14/2010
I must say that this is an amazing and powerful fic. Your style made for an interesting read and I absolutely loved that final sentence! Awesome job!
| SaceSage chapter 1 . 6/17/2010
You're the first person to make me like yaoi, written brilliantly and with a flourish I can't help but love.
| Yaoi te nani XD chapter 1 . 5/13/2010
Wow. I'm not usually a ItaNaru fan, but I really loved this fic :)
| Crazy PurpleSage chapter 1 . 4/14/2010
I love the surreal nature of it all. Descrbing Naruto as an elfinmale, daemon, impish, and then his idea of the marriage between death and laughter.
Brilliant. I also lke how you juxtapose this to Itachi's "fear" of heights.
Very well done. I enjoy reading your writing style immensely. Please continue writing. :)
| bobalinabokonon chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
So this is weird: I read this and was all WHOA and then I gave my brain a second to catch up and went through looking for the action, what the story would look like with no sound or narration. It was...weird. And awesome. And I feel strongly that this is better than Swedish Fish, and like NOTHING is better than Swedish Fish. It is silly but true. And Naruto the Sunflower seems anti-Naruto, but it's a more accessible/vulnerable Naruto and it works with Iruka, I guess. Right. I mean, it seems an orphan that most of a town hates would have considered suicide, especially one that laughs at death(?). Yeah, never mind. Really, really good!
| Imperial Mint chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
I don't really know what to say... it's utterly beautiful! I noticed this story a while ago but I've never really had time to read it properly. Thank you for deciding to post it up. I still don't think I could sing you enough praises!
| sillypanda chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
Great story as usual, and I love love loved the ending.
| Medicinal Biscuit chapter 1 . 12/8/2009
Imagery in this is beautiful, writing, lyrical and seductive. Wonderful fic, loved the mood. It's raining right now.
| anciie chapter 1 . 12/6/2009
This is so poetic XD But, I like it. It's good.
| coeur de lyon chapter 1 . 12/6/2009
I'm very grateful you republished this or whatever. It's incredibly well written, imo.
Nice nabokov vibe to it, too.
| Sakurafeather chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
How exactly does this embarass you? This was really well written! I can't believe you waited like 3 years to post such a great one-shot. The way you used your imagery, I can easily paint a picture of what was occuring inside the hotel room and how it looked like. Itachi was portrayed nicely as well Naruto who I almost laughed myself when I read he laughed during sex (reminded me of this video I saw on youtube). Your choice of words made the story flow nicely D
I do hope you decide to write more ItaNaru or even SasuNaru/NaruSasu because dang, you're one hell of a great writer!