I really enjoy your story, I especially liked the talk between Sirius and Zoe in this chapter.

Awesome story and I can not wait for the next chapter!

great story, if you ever decide to pick it back up, I will read it

I think the time for Harry and Sirius to come clean is upon them, and should be done before the Academy hit so they can factor in their abilities.

Loved it. wish there were more.

Thanks for sharing!

T.G.H.

This is well done. I hope you continue it soon.

Nine years to write five chapters? Whew. Don't rush or anything. (rolls eyes)

Did you take lessons from George R.R. Martin? LOL

You are a pretty good writer, except that you need to break up the huge blocks of text. It was difficult to read. Also, you changed characters a couple of times and gave us the same repeated info, just from their perspectives. It wasn't necessary. Just stay with the 3rd person narrative and get on with the story.

I know, it's 4 years too late for that advice. Maybe you'll come back in a few more years and listen to it? I hope Covid (or any natural disasters) did NOT get you.

Good fanfic.

ROFLMAO XD

This fic is fun, I hope you continue it. I also hope Harry eventually finds out what happened to the magicals.

Just found this and all I can say is if you write again or are still writing next time don't try fluffing your story with big or fancy words. Don't throw all that Shakespeare crap together to make it look good because all it'll do is confuse your average reader to shit and make them lose interest it's probably why you've only got a few hundred faves follows rather thousands even after a decade. A story needs to be readable not fancy

Just stumbled across this story. Hope there's more to read in it soon.

Love the story. Hope you can keep writing it. best of luck

I really like this story. I hope you can update soon. I am interested in how you plan on using Harry’s magic to aid the battles. Looking forward to the next chapter.

This is awesome and I hope you write more. Harry and River are a great pairing and I want to see Kaylee have that baby. A strike against the academy is needed.