|Reviews for Kidnap Me? Have Fun With That!|
| SKYSPRITE chapter 25 . 4/9
It's a good fanfic.
I had my doubts when I read the first chapter, but after that everything was fine for the most part.
I would say that this was largely a crack fic. I wouldn't say that the canon characters were OOC.
You did a good job keeping them in character, though there was several times that the Naruto characters used English words.
Normally I never mention grammar unless it's horrible, which yours isn't, but at times the grammar was just...weird.
So your reading along and then suddenly you come across this sentence. No matter how you look at it it doesn't make sense, so you stare at it. And stare at it. And stare at it.
The problem is, that usually the story continues on like that paragraph or sentence means something. It's like your putting together a puzzle that has missing pieces.
There was also times when a sentence or paragraph just stopped. It would end, like
The ending was a bit abrupt. It works, but just wish we could have seen more development between Krissy and Itachi.
I wouldn't say this is a romance. Its more of a crack fic with some serious themes and a hint of romance in the ending. The 'romance' in the genre is a little misleading and isn't true until the last part of the last chapter.
I love how Krissy had to return in the ending. The 'rips in the dimensions' you came up with made sense.
Over all, good job! I enjoyed this fic :)
| kara chapter 25 . 4/2
| Wedylai chapter 25 . 2/7
I almost had an asthma attack I was laughing so hard. This was great! Kipper Award for Best OC nominee. Seriously, I loved her. And you-you're awesome. You're the one steering all of her shenanigans. Great story!
| Shad0w W0lf chapter 25 . 1/11
Omg *picks self off the floor and wipes away tears from laughter.* I seriously loved reading this story, there were parts where I laughed so hard I almost peed myself. Now I am going to go read the sequel .
| Guest chapter 25 . 1/9
Wow... loved it:-D make more
| Naruto Meowzers chapter 25 . 1/6
Wow. Just incredible, that was so funny! I hope you keep writing such amazing fanfiction like this! I loved the "hat on steroids" line! Good luck with future writing!
| Jamaicanmecrazy chapter 25 . 12/8/2014
| kae-sshi chapter 17 . 12/1/2014
And this kids, is the real reason why Kakashi has white hair! Mwahahah!
This story is agreable to read and it lightened my day. Thank you.
| Camille chapter 9 . 11/28/2014
"Well he talks like an old wise man... though minus the wise I'm sure," I said. "Plus," I dared to reach up and point around Itachi's cheeks, "Wrinkles!"
WHAT ELSE ARE THOSE WRINKLES USED FOR! FAVORITE PART!
| Camille chapter 8 . 11/28/2014
HAHA! Loved the BNN'S joke! ( big nosed ninjas) HA! And I ALWAYS WANTED TO SEE A DRUNK UCHIHA! But where was the hat on steroids. HAT ON STEROIDS WERE ARE YOU! * searching for the hat* LOVE IT SO FAR!
| Meow chapter 7 . 9/29/2014
*Hugs Kisame and gives him 500 cookies*.
| Meow chapter 3 . 9/29/2014
Wow! This is seriously funny! By the way my two nicknames for Itachi and Kisame have always been: Itchy and Fish-Face. Not very creative, but I also call Orochimaru Rochi 'cause he just won't die and is like a bug that I want to squash. And finally my nickname for Kabuto is Kick, because he's like Orochimaru's side-kick and I'd like to kick him.
| xxxicecreamluvxxx chapter 1 . 9/4/2014
Kia ora! :) Didn't know much kiwi's actually came on this thing. Mostly read stories by American's or other people who's nationality I completely forgot - or really just ignored - about.
If you didn't notice already, Imma kiwi from New Zealand. :)
Text bck when you feel like it.
| easilyaddictedgirl chapter 25 . 7/19/2014
She got herself Stockholm Syndrome... Seriously.
Anyway, I love this though I guess it's not really as romantic as the other romance stories.
This is more of the adventure/humor type than romance. Because it only got a winsy bitsy part of that.
But this is SERIOUSLY AWESOMELY AMAZING.
I love her craziness! She's like: 'If I'm gonna die soon might as well make the best of it'
| BasicallyComplicated chapter 25 . 6/19/2014
T.T I-I-I lo-love your fanfict-tion! *sob* I-I-I-I'm ju-just so-so mo-moved. I-I-It was a-absolu-*hiccup* utely bea-beautiful! *sniffle sniffle* WAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!