Reviews for Kidnap Me? Have Fun With That! |
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![]() ![]() It is not an 'LOL' moment right now. ._. It's OVER! *cries* |
![]() ![]() I FREAKIN' DIED WHEN HIDAN STARTED FARTING! XD XD XD IT IS TEN-THIRTY PM RIGHT NOW IN CALIFORNIA, AMERICA AND I AM SUPPOSE TO BE SLEEPING. I ALMOST BURST OUT LAUGHONG OH GOSH I HAD TO COVER MY MOUTH! AHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHA OH MY FREAKIN' TOASTER STRUDDELS. |
![]() ![]() HOLY SHIZZLE FRENCH FRIES! NO PIKATSU, NO! AH SHIZZLES THEY KNOW IT'S ITACHI NOW AND I AM SO NERVOUS AHHHH FUDGE STICKS ITACHI LIVE ON MY DARLING! You got me into your language, Krissy. XD |
![]() ![]() Umm I Accidently hit 'Post Review' so I didn't finish my last review. XD so here is what I wrote: Kisame, you do know you just complimented Krissy? Here's my reason. ( I made this up XD not lying ) Beautiful Intelligent Thoughtful Creative HAWT XD XD XD AHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA XD XD XD |
![]() ![]() Kisame, you do know that you just complimented Krissy, right? Hers my reason ( I made this up back in 6th grade XD ) Beautifuk |
![]() ![]() When Kisame started singing his shark song at the end where you put your authors note, I started thinking about the Llama Song. XD 'Happy Llama Sad Llama Mentally Disturbed Llama Super Llama Drama Llama Big Fat Mama Llama' And if you know what I'm talking about, it's the Llama Sing except Twaimz style where he added other parts. The one I just wrote right now wasn't created by him tho. Lol, getting too much into the details. |
![]() ![]() When you first mentioned BNN, I was like, 'Isnt that like a News name or something?' but when I actually know what it means, I feel so dumb. God Bless America. *facepalm* |
![]() ![]() I officially died. God bless America (my country) and IceCrystal7. XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's a good fanfic. I had my doubts when I read the first chapter, but after that everything was fine for the most part. I would say that this was largely a crack fic. I wouldn't say that the canon characters were OOC. You did a good job keeping them in character, though there was several times that the Naruto characters used English words. Normally I never mention grammar unless it's horrible, which yours isn't, but at times the grammar was just...weird. So your reading along and then suddenly you come across this sentence. No matter how you look at it it doesn't make sense, so you stare at it. And stare at it. And stare at it. The problem is, that usually the story continues on like that paragraph or sentence means something. It's like your putting together a puzzle that has missing pieces. There was also times when a sentence or paragraph just stopped. It would end, like The ending was a bit abrupt. It works, but just wish we could have seen more development between Krissy and Itachi. I wouldn't say this is a romance. Its more of a crack fic with some serious themes and a hint of romance in the ending. The 'romance' in the genre is a little misleading and isn't true until the last part of the last chapter. I love how Krissy had to return in the ending. The 'rips in the dimensions' you came up with made sense. Over all, good job! I enjoyed this fic :) |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I almost had an asthma attack I was laughing so hard. This was great! Kipper Award for Best OC nominee. Seriously, I loved her. And you-you're awesome. You're the one steering all of her shenanigans. Great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg *picks self off the floor and wipes away tears from laughter.* I seriously loved reading this story, there were parts where I laughed so hard I almost peed myself. Now I am going to go read the sequel . |
![]() ![]() Wow... loved it:-D make more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Just incredible, that was so funny! I hope you keep writing such amazing fanfiction like this! I loved the "hat on steroids" line! Good luck with future writing! Best wishes, Naruto Meowzers |
![]() ![]() Sequel? Please? |