| Reviews for Kidnap Me? Have Fun With That! |
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   Mistress Persephone chapter 12 . 3/20/2010 love the story please update soon! I LOVE KRISSY! |
| Ripedeath chapter 12 . 3/20/2010 Good chapter I read half of it but didn't finish to review. It was a good chapter, it shows that she has at least another emotion besides annoyng (even though that side is funny :D) A chapter like this needed to be done for the story to move along. |
| oOBlueBumbleBeesOo chapter 12 . 3/19/2010 yay i'm so glad you updated, and two chapter as well! even though they didn't have the usual humor, they were still really good. hope you update soon, cause i can't wait untill the next chapter. i really love your story, it would have to be my favourite out of any others! |
| PENUCHI chapter 12 . 3/19/2010 Lol. That was hilarious. And your absence is fine. Meh eesh unable to update mah stories either due to mah parents. Lol. But that was ubers funny so good job. Meh liked the end the best! Ja ne! |
| E.V.Emry chapter 12 . 3/19/2010 EP! I LOVE the story! :D Can't wait for an update! :D -ILoveReadingAndWriting :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D |
| PsychoWrites chapter 12 . 3/19/2010 This is a really good story. I hope those chunnin didn't die. Well-written and very funny. I look forward to reading more |
| katsekala chapter 12 . 3/19/2010 NO! Did Itachi really killed them? I liked the guys! Many kisses! |
| ME chapter 12 . 3/19/2010 GAH!I love this story!It took you forever to update amillion thanks for finally doing so:D |
| CuttlefishShiz chapter 12 . 3/19/2010 I loved it I would have been laughing really hard but it's 2am now I didn't want to wake every one up... So I giggle quietly to myself |
| ceres chapter 12 . 3/19/2010 Love the chapter! Good job as always! Dun worry about the humor, it's got to be serious when kisame isn't there! LOL! |
| King0Mik chapter 12 . 3/18/2010 I am a grammar freak. XD I apologize if this turns out to be an epically long review...or maybe I don't... Anyhoo, I believe you once misspelled separate as seperate. (Tis okay. I used to do it ALL THE TIME. No joke...) My teacher taught me that there's "a rat" in separate. You have some confusions with "your" and "you're." Mostly, you're replacing "you're" with "your." I see things lik this a lot... "Your" is used to show possession while "you're" is to show an action. Er...yeah... Right! And clauses! (This will probably make this review pretty large. BEWARE!) Right, so there's a sentence called a "simple sentence;" it made up of a noun and a verb. An example would be "She ran." Another name for a "simple sentence" is an "independent clause." Which brings us to the dependent clauses. "Dependent clauses" are basically a simple sentence with a preposition...and something else which I forgot. Examples of this include "because she was being chased," "due to her boredom," and "while she was singing." An independent clause combined with a dependent clause will create a "complex sentence." In a complex sentence, you either put the independent clause before or after the dependent clause. If the dependent clause comes before the independent clause, you need to use a comma after the dependent clause. If the dependent clause comes after the independent clause, you do not use a comma. Actually, you can start a sentence with "because." Because they believe you will make fragments, teachers tell you not to do so. Examples of complex sentences include: "Because she was being chased, she ran." "She ran because she was being chased." "Due to her boredom, she ran." "She ran due to her boredom." "While she was singing, she ran." "She ran while she was singing." This then brings us to "compound sentences." (Do I sound like a boring old teacher giving a lecture or what? And to think I'm still in middle school/junior high.) "Compound sentences" are basically two "simple sentences" or "independent clauses" combined with one of the following (capitalized) words: For, And, Nor, But, Or, Yet, or So. You can also remember them as "FANBOYS." Yeah... *looks up at review* Man! That is epic! EPIC I TEL YOU! EPIC! |
| Luxord's Xigbar chapter 12 . 3/18/2010 please updeate again son. i need it! |
| SayNoToStrangers chapter 12 . 3/18/2010 omg...this is so freakin funny! pls keep updating its getting good! |
| Usagi323 chapter 12 . 3/18/2010 H-he didn't KILL them right? Just Shariganed them right? 'Cuase if he did kill them...you like weasel-cabobs right? *smiles evilly* |
| toraffles chapter 12 . 3/18/2010 Although it wasn't as funny as it was in the previous chapters, it is still really good. After all, don't all stories need even just a touch of seriousness? (This Krissy person sounds like me! Hahahahaaha! |