Chapter 12:

Okay, maybe this chapter wasn't as funny as the other ones, but I still liked it a lot. And I've got hopes that the three aren't dead, because I know Itachi doesn't kill unless he can't avoid it and, most importantly, because you said they were going to be important - so they can't die just yet, can they? Please don't let them be dead :(

I think I like Yoshi best (don't ask me why, though...), but Atsu's fun too. I like the way he just enjoys life (most ninja just seem to be so dead serious about the whole thing) and his humor, too. "The-Great-Krissy_Lightening-Attack" *lol*

Yup, he definitely makes me laugh ;)

Especially the scence with the clothes *lol* I'd say he's definitely a bigger pervert than weasel (who's probably even able to ignore his hormones...a little wonder considering that he's a man but rather disturbing,really...)

I really want to know what Itachi thought when he heard that he was supposed to be the ex-boyfriend *lol* "WTF", probably Like I said, this is going to be really embarassing for Krissy...I hope he asks her about that later, this would be such a funny conversation *grin*

It was so obvious Itachi would defeat them *sigh* like I said before, I hope they are alright...but seeing how pissed Itachi was they probably aren't...whatever, as long as they're still alive...

Chapter 11:

Yeah! First of all I gotta say I'm so glad you're back and updating again ;)and two chapters at once, yay

school sucks, I know...hehe, that's the good thing about being at university. A lot of work during the semester, but long holidays too ...well at least when you only just started studying...i fear I won't be able to chill that much next year...and actually I SHOULD be learning some latin and classical greek vocabulary I guess...but reviewing is more fun so I'm doing that first ;) so I guess you'll just have to put up with 2 more of my massive reviews *insert evil grin here*

Honestly, I've been having to much free time lately...

Krissy is unbelievable. She actually climbed up the tree? *shakes head* really, unbelievable. somehow it didn't surprise me she fell down - trees and Krissy just don't seem to get along well with each other ;)

Just her luck to run into ninjas AGAIN...but at least they were nice ones this time. Except for Whackoo, maybe ( I love this nickname *lol*). Ha, and she manages to slap a ninja in the face again, that girl really is something. oh, and I loved your description of his facial expression "as if passing an exceptionally large kidney stone" *lol*

I like him anyway. He's going to be great to annoy, just like Kisame *evil grin*. And I like Yoshi and Atsu, too. Atsu and Krissy are so alike ;) That means, I probably woulnd't stand being with him for longer than 5 minutes, but it's so fun to watch (or read, rather)

But, OMG, you killed T-Rex. How could you? *sniff* But, thinking of it, it probably wasn't you who killed him...it was Beethoven

And Krissy told them Itachi was her ex-boyfriend *haha* This is going to be very interesting when they meet...I wonder how Itachi willreact once he hears that. God, this will be so embarassing for Krissy...uh oh..."Freaking perverted, jerk faced, evil eyed, ruddy weasel!" *lool*

You know, at the end of the paragraph with Krissy, she kind of reminded me of Gai, the way she spoke...this "young language grasshopper" so reminded me of the "power of youth" stuff Gai always talks about well, they're both kinda hyper, so I guess the two of them would get along pretty well, too

(I really miss smileys here...i want to use tons of smiley like I usually do...*sniff*)

Hehe, and Kisame is still ranting about how to kill Krissy...he must be seriously pissed no wonder, when he hasn't been able to remove the ink from his hair...well he deserves it

I'm curious about what will happen now that Itachi found them...I have a feeling this might not be too good...

AWESOME! this is more amazing than my brother actually getting off the computer for once and gone outside! (seriously, that dude had no social life what so ever)anyway, please write more coz this is totally awesome and stuff and keep on walking m8! please (times infinity) write more(times infinity)

Yay! Upates!

Aww man! did the 3 awesome ninjas die? please say no...

,oh and great chapters! _

Gah! Just update soon!

Chapter 10:

Krissy's a genius ;) I really gotta give her credit, she knocked the Akatsuki out! It was a prettx good plan, really. Plus, she got lucky to have an excuse for not drinking the water in the morning- well, it was about time she had some luck ;)I mean, she's even constantly walking into trees * lol* yes, she definitely deserved some luck.

I was laughing so hard when I read the stuff about the shark bus and I'm still grinning like hell every time I think about it. I remember seeing this bus when I was in New Zealand some years ago, and-...yeah, it's just so hilarious, because I can really picture Kisame jumping towards this bus screaming "mommy" *rofl*

Itachi's right- Krissy's REALLY unpredictable.

I still can't believe she actually painted their faces and braided Itachi's ponytail *lol* I almost fell of my chair while reading this paragraph, just because I was laughing so hard.

"Why is there a stick in my nose?" *lool*

Dammit, I'm still having difficulties to breathe and to stiffle my laughter when I read this sentence and/or think about what Itachi's hair must've looked like when he undid the braids.

Kisame's makeover is really funny, I gotta say. I'm still wondering about Itachi's face paint, though. What does he have on his face? The same stuff (a smile would be good for him!) or something else? Please tell us in the next chapter, okay?

And the weasel and fish made of bandages are cute ;)

I wonder, how the hell did Krissy get the cloaks up tehre? She didn't climb up the tree, did she?

So, yeah, I'm curious how the story will go on, and where Kisame and Itachi will find her (I'm pretty sure they will, eventually...because what's Krissy going to do if she can't drive them nuts?) and what's going to happen next...

so please, PLEASE update soon! It has been ages...well, I know the summer holidays are over in NZ and you probably have a lot of work to do (I hope there's nothing else wrong and it's just school keeping you from writing), but I really hope you'll find some time to write and update soon!

(Or have you been killed by the annoyed, hungover Itachi? I hope not)

Bye for now,Dustland-Fairytales

Chapter 9:

*laughs* I want a photo of Itachi with a toilet seat on his head.

So Krissy is really back to her normal self already, which is god ;) A part of me feels sorry for Itachi (pervert, huh? *snicker* I admire his patience ) and Kisame, but mostly I don't. Seeing how annoyed they are is just too much fun. I think I have a good picture of the Itachi "No shit Sherlock-what gave it away"-look in my head and every time I think about it it makes me laugh.

Weasel's interrogation...I already had a feeling this wouldn't turn out well...wow, one really shouldn't be anywhere near him when he snaps (okay, you shouldn't be near anywhere near Kisame as long as Itachi isn't there to save you, either, but man, this was bad).

I guess he only didn't kill her because he had to bring her to the headquaters...and this is bad, really bad...I suppose he'll ask her about that again...I don't think he'll just leave it with that, after all he still doesn't know where she learned this...and who knows what will happen then...maybe he will strangle her in the end...I hope he doesn't, though

Luckily, the chapter got funnier again after that (well, lucky for Krissy, at least - I liked the interrogation scene very much, too. Somehow I like everything you rite, and that doesn't happen very often). Okay, it's probably unrealistic that Krissy's up and about that fast after being strangled, but this is fiction, so what?

Itachi uses herbal shampoo...another secret is disclosed. He should borrow Krissy some, she'd probably like a shower at this point ;) they shoudl go into town, so that Kisame can buy the anti-wrinkles cream for weasel, too *lol*

I knew it- there's this small part in Kisame that likes Krissy and to a point, they are soulmates when it comes to annoying people *lol* It's incredible how much fun he haves as long as he isn't the one being annoyed. Like I said, he's childish sometimes...who knows, maybe he will work with Krissy one day tin order to steal Itachis shampoo *lol* at least when he's on sugar *grin*

Chapter 8:

It's true, this chapter isn't the funniest one (even though it does have it's moments). But before I start, thanks for the drunken Uchiha *lol* I can't get enough of him ;)

So yeah, let's start. Somehow I knew they'd come to rescue Krissy ;) And, right at the beginning, she actually managed to make Itachi SMILE (and to hug him, too!)*shocked* Unbelievable. I'm beginning to hope that the category "romance" then really can be applied to this story in later chapters if you get what I mean ;)

I'm really curious what's going to happen ;)

After all, she already feels comfortable in his arms that's got to be a sign ;) Btw, how old is Krissy in this story? And how old is Itachi? I'm just thinking about her comment to tell Sasuke the truth BEFORE he turns into an revenge crazed loony, so I guess this story doesn't take place shortly before the fight between Sasuke and Itachi,or does it?

However, back to business ;)

hehe, Kisame doesn't seem too happy about having Krissy back. I guess he would've liked to NOT hear her singing for a few days or ever again for the rest of his life, rather ;)

"the tiny ball of annoying joy" *lol*

and being humiliated like that, having to take her piggy back...I could pity him...but I won't ;) I like to see him suffer like that ;)

plus, he deserves it. Stupid Kisame, not really caring whether he kills those people or not, and actually enjoying it (unlike Itachi, I guess, even though he didn't stop either. Gr. Stupid Itachi. Couldn't he just listen to Krissy? There was a moment when I wished she HAD eaten something recently, so that she could throw up over him - would have served him right! But, on the other hand I guess, this is the ninja life...and there's nothing he can do about it, really...)

Well, at least she smacked him ;) I can't believe he really got smacked *lol* and Kisame too- thumps up for Krissy, chalk up another point on the blackboard for her.

I wonder whether Itachi really only "cares" for her because he wants to reach the headquaters unharmed (more or less at least) so that they can use the Jutsu better or whether he might really care for her. I fear it isn't the latter, though *sigh* that would probably be too good to be true, even though he did heal her and stuff...

But uh-uh, she slipped this information about Sasuke...not good...this is going to be bad...

Chapter 7:

Flying fish hug for Kisame :D And another one for Itachi- now that you've gotten him drunk I'm sure he won't kill me when trying 37% Vodka...wow, not bad ;) It'll be a wonder if he isn't knocked out straight away ;) I can't wait to see what he's going to do now

He, I know Itachi and Kisame would win the fight against those BNNs (good thing they aren't on sugar and alcohol in the story I'd love to see Kisame drunk, too, though- maybe that gives you some ideas )

Poor Krissy, though...being with the BNNs is definitely worse than being with weasel and fish-face. Even though she didn't look too well then (hell, don't ninjas ever wash themselves?What about hygiene on their missions?Do I really wanna know how they smell at this moment?), at least they didn't injure her.

I've been laughing my ass off (again) when I read Krissys conversation with the BNNs- they must've been extremely surprised by her "information" *lol* or maybe they just thought she was insane...a bit of both, probably.

"If you wanna win, run and hug them first, it'll throw them off" *lol*

I don't think Krissy's losing it when she's talking eith the wall - I talk with things that don't do what I want them to do, too, all the time ;) and I know a lot of other people who act the same. It just makes you feel better, doesn't it?

Huh, climbing off the wall when there're five stories to the ground. Maybe Krissy is crazy after all Well, it might've worked out I guess...but yeah, Murphys law...anything that can go wrong will go wrong, right? Hehe, I even got a poster with several variations of that law like "mother nature is a bitch " and stuff, I think that would would fit here, too

So, she's falling...I don't think she'll hit the ground, trhough, right?

Chapter 6:

Funny, I'm just sitting here eating cookies- you want one for Kisame and Itachi? *grin* I still want to see Itachi on sugar. Kisame is really funny, then ;) he should eat cookies more often, then he wouldn't be so easily annoyed all the time

He's mean, waking Krissy up like that. Especially when she's clearly not a morning person ;) He's lucky that she didn't smash him like she did with her alarm clocks But who knows, maybe she'll kick his family jewels one day, that would be fun ;)

Well, Kisame is fun. And Itachi...he's cool ;) I like his calm attitude.

And he actually gets krissy to engage ina more or less serious conversation- okay, the first part that she started wasn't, of course (braid his ponytail *lol*), but later he actually made her tell him why she's behaving like this. I like her attitude, going down fighting...with all the means she possesses.

But, oh, she slipped this sentence about Sasuke...when I read this the first time I already had the feeling that this was going to be bad...he'll remember it and then...who knows what'll happen?

Hehe, and she managed to wrap the rope around them too bad they're ninjas and can just poof away...otherwise this would have become interesting

And then came the other ninjas...60 against 2, that's really a bit unfair. But it's so like Krissy to insult their leader...a deformity, ha, Kisame and Itachi must've felt like bumping their head into a tree or something I'm sure they thought it embarassing to have a captive like that...kind of makes them lose their face. The scary, dangerous Akatsuki accompanied by an annoying, loud girl and they don't even treat her badly (at least...more or less, and not until now), I'm sure those stupid BNNs think they're going soft.

Too bad for them they aren't...

Chapter 5

Whistling fish with bright green underwear *lol* Gah, Kisame is so funny when he's annoyed. And Krissy is real good at annoying him ;)

I really begin to like him, though, the way you paint him, at least ( he isn't really my favourite character in the anime...). He's actually interested in Itachis shampoo, eh? *lol* he's got some interesting sides to him I swear, one day he and Krissy are going to sit next to each other with a bottle of sake and talk about god and the world and Itachi's shampoo. *grin*

He really got some childish character traits, like when plastering her face with rice and, like in this chapter, throwing her into the river. Thimps up for krissy for sending him flying in the first place :D she always manages to surprise him, doesn't she? Throwing him into the river, hugging him... *lol* I'm looking forward to knowing what else she'll do to him

Ahh, and I cannot believe Itachi was actually paying attention when Krissy told him that Kisame was wearing bright green underwear *lol* I almost fell off my chair from laughing when I read that. So hilarious!

A shame she couldn't really get him wet, though ;) but Itachi is agenius, so...she'll have a hard time with him, I guess. Hope she keeps on trying to hug, him, though this is gonna be so funny.

and btw, I love your A/Ns with those little Itachi/Kisame scenes xD aleays looking forward to those ;)

Chapter 4: ;)

Huh, Itachi really has the patience of a saint- good for Krissy ;) and I gotta say, he learned He actually said "be quiet", not "Stop singing" *lol* not that that would stop Krissy anyway, but still, he can obviously deal better with her than Kisame ;)and he knows how to make her be quiet, although that isn't really fair of course, using his sharingan on her...but at least he and Kisame got a good night's sleep for once ;)

I wonder, what do the two of them do when Krissy needs to go to the bathroom? Tie her to a tree and return a few minutes later? Kind of an akward situation...okay, that's probably still an understatement. Poor Krissy.

So Kisame is very attached to his hats-on-steroid, huh? Who would've thought that? He should've given it to her, then she might've kept quiet- for a while, at least *lol* not a very long while, but still. Good thing that Itachi knows how Kisame can entertain her

I can't believe he was atually that childish to pay her back for the food-fight by sticking rice onto her face *lol* And I can't believe she really bit him- like I said before, she's got some guts ;) No wonder he tastes crappy, thoguh. I mean- he's a fish, shark, whatever...not some fresh sushi unfortunately.

And then came T-Rex *lol* it's like her to give her cell phone a name and it kind of fits that it's such an old thing. And agai, this makes me wonders why the freaking hell ninja don't have telephones in their world if they even got movies?

I also liked the paragraph in the 3rd person pov, because that makes you get to know Itachia little better, too. And I like him, even though he thinks about killing Kirssy I can understand him, I have to admit that. At least he respects her- let's see whether something more than respect develops there...

Chapter 3

I'll keep it shorter rhis time, though, as I need to get going soon.

I don't know who to pity more- Krissy for being stuck with those jerks, or Itachi and Kisame for being stuck with her . Although she wasn't even being annoying in this chapter. Her singing must've impressed then quite strongly, considering how even the threat to start singing again made them take a break

all in all, there was not much happening in this chap (I'm not saying this is bad, though!), it was just basically a lot of thinking on Krissys side, which was very interesting too, because you just get to know her better.

I'm always laughing my ass off when she starts insulting Kisame. Well, I guess he's just her object of preference, as he's a lot easier to annoy than Itachi, who jsut ignores her (He's a champ at that). The imagination of having half a snake and half a fish after a crossbreed of Kisame and Orochimaru (uäh,. he's a spooky and disgusting guy, even Kisame's fishface is better) is really funny. Where do you get those hilarious ideas from?

Yup, Chapter 2 *grin*

Honestly, If I were Itachi, (or Kisame) I would've killed Krissy immediately. Or at least, as soon as she started to sing

It's almost unbelievable how annoying a single person can be, right? Poor guys- she's really getting on their nerves if even Itachi is thinking about killing her.

I really doubt either of them has been called names like "nutjobs, jerks...walking piece of seafood, weasel" and so on before. ;) Do they even understand the meaning of those insults ? *lol*

It's a curious thing how Krissy is still a person who loves having fun (and is enjoying herself), even when she situation is that bad and she's well aware of it. I mean, she's being pessimistic (note the half empty water bottle), but she still manages to find something fun to do, and I admire that about her.

I can't bevlieve she actually managed to hit Kisame with food *lool* he always claims to be such a great ninja, but I'm pretty sure if it came to a food fight between him and Krissy, he'd definitely lose. Unlike Itachi- it didn't surprise me at all that he managed to catch the rice. I was surprised, though, that he didn't seem to notice her throwing food at his partner...did he not see it, or did he not WANT to see it? *grin*

And oh, I would've loved to see Itachi's facial expression when she said "No wonder you can't get yourself a girlfriend." Okay, it was probably expressionless, like always, but he mustve thought "WTF?"

And then she started singing. This girl is absolutely incredible and insane *lol* And I loved how Kisame akss Itachi whether he could kill her, it's so funny. Secretly thoguh, I think , there is a part of Kisame that's getting attached to her - some kind of love-hate relationship :D of course he'd never admit it

And then Krissy even managed to outsmart Itachi- I suppose that was a new experience for him I'm waiting to see more of those scenes