|Reviews for Secrets and Lies|
| iamaHappyDragonIndeed chapter 1 . 3/3/2013
| crazycutie6688 chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
Y U NO FINISH DIS STORY?
| Shadow-the-Knight chapter 1 . 6/13/2011
| zoebella9898 chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
I like it! I hope you continue!:D
| xXLonely-WorldXx chapter 1 . 6/6/2010
I like it so far just a couple of questions though... So I'm guessing mama and papa are Francis and Arthur? Any ways Its a good read I'll make sure to subscribe to the story -
| tragiang chapter 1 . 12/13/2009
For a first fanfic, it wasn't bad. But in my opinion, maybe you should have someone to look it over before publishing. A few errors distracted me and the sudden capitalizing in some sentences caught my eye. Maybe there should be a break or line, or something when Alfred is writing in his diary. It sort of makes it easy on the eye, and looks neater. You could try lessening the dialogue and converting them into paragraphs instead. Anyhow, your writing style will definitely get better as you continue to write )
| Derpity Derp Derp chapter 1 . 12/7/2009
lol mathew has a tiny dick xD
can't wait for the next chapter!
| dark-Yuuki-sama chapter 1 . 12/7/2009
Hahaha Poor Alfred huh. Luv this story so far
| AmeriCanada Love chapter 1 . 12/6/2009
It looks very promising! I can't wait for the next chapter.
| NitemareAi chapter 1 . 12/6/2009
omg love it xD 3