|Reviews for Cat and Mouse who wins?|
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/9/2013
| fork104 chapter 1 . 10/9/2012
Hey, it sounds really good. Is there still more to come?
| Lucinda Primrose Belacqua chapter 1 . 10/5/2012
A little rushed but a good story line!
| YesIWentThereJulia chapter 1 . 9/27/2010
| redacted357123123462 chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
It was alright.
| motherpucker chapter 1 . 5/8/2010
Aw! A cute idea. a few mistakes, but still.
It was a bit rushed - space it out a bit more.
I hope you don't mind my constructive crit. It's only my personal opinion.
A sweet idea. Keep writing.
| Stellala13 chapter 1 . 3/12/2010
I love it!
Randomness, this one is so much better! But...do I have permission to be a nit-pick again?
The Dialogue hasn't been separated, again. But this makes so much sense, despite that. A little generic, but if that's the feel you're going for, it works really, really well. Your spelling, It could be better, but the mistakes aren't so blatant that it detracts from the overall charm.
Overall, though, it's a lovely piece.
I...I hope you don't think I'm trying to be mean or...well, I am really, really sorry. It's just my nature. But all I'm trying to do is help you, and keep from helping other people too much.
But please do listen, I am trying to help.