|Reviews for Existence|
| BlueEyedBrigadier chapter 1 . 12/26/2009
It's kinda odd, but I like this ficlet you've got here because the POV is vague enough that it could be River talking about her observations about the Academy staff and what they're doing to Claire/Whiskey...or that it's Whiskey observing all the horrors being perpetrated on River. Probably more the latter than the former, but I think it could both ways IMO.
Still...the eerily neutral POV of the observer goes a long way to selling just how "alien" (i.e. different than perceived normal human standards) Claire and River have become when horrible experiments are rendered into comments about the tube and wires like someone would talk about an everyday sight. Awesome work!