|Reviews for Daughter of the King of Games Pt1:Recurring Over (rewriting)|
| MissBrains101 chapter 27 . 12/31/2014
Wow, now that was a good read! Good work! You're a pro, bro! Look forward to read the next one!
Happy New Year!
| MissBrains101 chapter 15 . 8/21/2014
Dina likes what she is reading! Keep it up!
| MissBrains101 chapter 11 . 7/19/2014
Good story so far. You should put OC (original character) in the character list if it's about Amet and Jet.
| MissBrains101 chapter 5 . 7/4/2014
I like this. This is getting interesting.
| Drake chapter 26 . 7/13/2013
Girl trubles help
| kim chapter 24 . 7/13/2013
| Drake chapter 23 . 7/13/2013
Email me at and I'll give you my opinon k
| Drake chapter 22 . 7/13/2013
I love it mokoba and someone
| Drake chapter 21 . 7/13/2013
Put in show e1 s1
| Drake chapter 19 . 7/13/2013
Make a show
| Drake chapter 18 . 7/13/2013
| kage kitsune 14 chapter 27 . 2/5/2013
This was epic!
| Taeniaea chapter 27 . 5/31/2011
| Bwahaha chapter 10 . 9/3/2010
So far so good! But if you're wrinting in 1st person stay in one point of view. (If you really, truly, absolutely hafta switch POV's try writing in third person.)
| ForestGuardian311 chapter 27 . 6/1/2010
Not bad at all. Just a lot of errors scattered throughout the chapters, though. If you fix those, then it'll be a better story. Good job! I look forward to reading the next one!