Reviews for Different
TortoisetheStoryteller chapter 1 . 11/2/2013
I like how you wrote Will's personality shift here. Good job.
Allison237Gleek chapter 1 . 5/9/2013
Haha! That was sweet!
TeraWatt chapter 1 . 2/20/2013
Cheese? No. Coffee? YES!

"You take one bean of that coffee and somebody gonna get a'hurt REAL BAD!"

TeraWatt
Guest chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
it would not be cheese but coffee, but it's still a really good story!:D
I-sold-my-soul-for-a-cookie chapter 1 . 9/29/2010
I would hate him if he stole my cheese too...LOVE IT!
RandomPersonNumber12345 chapter 1 . 7/26/2010
I'm finding myself loving these post-Skandia stories...

And this one doesn't disappoint! Halt was really nice...

And he likes cheese? XD
Lady Faucheur chapter 1 . 2/28/2010
Nice xD

You need a little work with your capitals, but nice xD
Scaryman chapter 1 . 12/13/2009
Yelling at Halt would be like yelling at Chuck Norris, even Will wouldn't do it...
BurningSapphireFlames chapter 1 . 12/6/2009
Good job I think.

Your only on the third book? Ha ha ha... ive only read up to the 6th. Im wanting to read 7 8 and 9, but I cant because im not sure if they came out to America yet..
Halt's Apprentice chapter 1 . 12/6/2009
It was okay. Two things I noticed are:

The first letters in names are capitalized no matter what.

And every time a person talks a new paragraph starts.

It was okay. Just work on the things I pointed out and I'm sure you'll be fine:)