Reviews for The Banes Family Legacy
darkheartrocker86 chapter 4 . 9/15/2013
Please update! It's such a good story!
manticore-gurl071134 chapter 4 . 6/22/2013
great fic so far. I hope it will eventually be continued.
Sailor Pandabear chapter 4 . 5/4/2013
interesting
Xireana Prime chapter 4 . 10/31/2012
wow... this epic! i can't ewait till the next chapter!
XxMaraudersxX chapter 4 . 3/23/2012
Please update soon as the storyline is very good.
angel897 chapter 4 . 2/5/2012
liked it so please keep writing kay
BleckBlah5956 chapter 4 . 8/23/2011
wow! update soon please.
demonpixie1 chapter 4 . 6/25/2011
Holy crap... This is really good. I'm really eager to read more and can't wait for the (hopefully) eventual update!
At the Heart of the Storm chapter 4 . 3/2/2011
AAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! I CANNOT BELIEVE YOU ENDED IT THERE! Just as we were about to find out something important! (

Please update soon! D I LOVE IT! D

XXX
Shadir chapter 4 . 2/22/2011
I would tell them: run, run, but they need to know the complete history before making it.
MissMary chapter 4 . 2/17/2011
I think a bulldozer might be the answer...
chaitea16 chapter 4 . 2/15/2011
You manage to say so much about a scene with only vividly describing certain aspects that say far more to me then long winded paragraphs of overly detailed imagery ever could. The room Sam and Bee are waiting in being a fantastic example of this skill. Also, the way you used setting the scene to build on Sam's anxiety further as he waited definitely made for a very powerful almost calm before the whirlwind of emotion that is a gorgeously tragic written Mikaela came barreling in. Now that the parlor has been thoroughly set, I look forward to seeing how the Butler gos about confessing to the murder of her childhood.
Minirowan chapter 4 . 2/13/2011
You just have to update soon, or within a reasonable time, this story is just too good! I love the imagery, you are very good at metaphors and depicting the scene. I haven't read this writing style in a while and it's eager refreshing, plus its perfect for the theme!

I can't begin to imagine what this Banes family legacy is, it has to be really bad to traumatize Mikaela. I have an inkling that the butler is sympathetic to Mikaela, although only because you didn't describe him as disgusted with Mikaela's behavior.

Anyway, you're doing a great job, keep it up!

Also, I'm sorry to hear about your friend. I know what it's like to lose someone you care about.
Sunstreaker's Squishy chapter 4 . 2/13/2011
Again, I really hate to go back to the sunken in chest and elongated Victorian necks. I rather stick with the t-shirts and jeans, thank you very much. Ironhide is going to be strapped down very hard when he hears about this abuse. :(
leoshunny1985 chapter 4 . 2/12/2011
love it
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